domingo, 25 de marzo de 2012

novel project

i did this Uglies project with daniela canas

my themes:
an operation whont change you
been pretty isnet everithing in life
being pretty dosent last forever
frindship is biger then lookes
looks8
loves conquers all
Daniela´s themes:
- the main character is keeping promises with her best friend and would do anything to keep them( friendship is the most important thing in life)-the main character when gets to the smoke docent want to petty her friend because she knows that this place where they are is her friends dream( friendship is the most important thing in life)
- tally went to pretty town because she missed her best friend and she would suffer the consequences if she got caught just to see him( love breaks all the rules)
-tally would do anything to become pretty ( when you have a dream nothing comes between you and your dream)

themes:

Daniela´s :
i think the theme is that friendship is not about the looks is about the sincerity and the promises you keep with them. a friendship is more important then becoming or being a pretty because friendship is forever in the other hand being pretty last little and wont guaranty you happiness. tally realizes this after many mistakes she made but she did a good job trying to keep promises and loyalty even though it was difficult sometimes for her and made a lot of thing she regrate latter

mariana´s
: i think that the theme of the uglies is that love conquers all because its not only about physical look or what you see in the outside but the inside also, you fight for love in many ways, fghting for who you like and for your friends. uglies express alot of this ideas. also anpther example is that Tally ends up a pretty relationship she has with Shay to be with David, so they show that with love everything is possible and you are going to fight and de powerfull.

Choosen theme

the theme we chose was Daniela´s friendship is the most important thing in life, we chose this theme because we belive that it is really reflected throughout all the book, and giving examples of it like they always said that shay only wanted to be best friends and that opperations are just thing which will change your outside but not your inside and you will be still being who you are.
daniels theme was better than mine because after alot of discussion we figured out that friendship in this case was more important than love, love at one point was really important because all the David stuff and so, but at the end what mattered was the relationship between Shay and Tally and looks or aspects didnt count.





FINAL FOR A 4


http://www.xtranormal.com/watch/13225910/uglies-theme


lunes, 12 de marzo de 2012

feedback

in the feedback we had in class they mostly told me to:

- put more details about the freezing part
- the process which takes place to edit it and know it more especific
- more information related with the cost

Group Work

many people preffer to work in groups or by partners and that includes me. when you work in a group you learn to do and to express thoughts not only by not only your way but the ways your friends have also therefore you have new ideas and new ways to show your work.

a really good aspect in working in groups is that you will not have to do all the research by yourself, your peers will be also responsable of their part and that will make you focus more on your part and then be able to compare and contrast being an expert in your topic and then becoming one in other topics thanks to your peers althought you must be willing to do your part because you depend on your peers work and they depend in yours.

as in working in a group i find out that the most advantage when you dont understand something you have resources who are not only your teacher or the internet which in some cases you wont understand but people, your team mates who explain to you and help you understand. its really important when the time comes to put everything together beacuse deffinetly more than one mind thinks and has more ideas that just one.

i love working in groupss!!!

jueves, 8 de marzo de 2012

first invention draft


Life Extension Treatment

 Invention Description

Our invention is about how to prevent dyeing in early times and how can you live more with the technique that freezing yourself. By the calculations if you freeze yorself at night then you will live as twice as what you live now. 
A really important part for you to live longer is your organs and your body inside meaning the heart the lungs and all the vital organs have to be really healthy. 
If you decide to freeze yourself you will do it at night therefore you will live twice your life. Freezing yourself will be in a special coffin the type of coffin depends on the one you order there is many diffrent kind of then and ut will also depend on that the price of the whole treatment. Special wires will help you control your heart beat and help you be stable every night with ice that will keep you cold. The place in which you will be a room that is in a really special temperature and inside well the coffin. 
This new idea will be about 3.000 dollars, as the coast of the coffrin is high and all the mantainance of the treatment. As the price says only people who are really high class and who can afford it can buy it, for the future we also think that hospitals may be trying this systmen and can even be for all day long treatments. People who have disseases may also buy it. 
The main purpose of this invention is to make people kive longer and make then also not soffer because the organs will be in a really high level of healthyness also by letting then rest at night time when the person is freezed and so that will also help the organs be healthier. 
We plan that this buisness can have also sales depending on the person who we are talking about and the circunstances the person is in. 
This invention is really important also because you will be freezed and with ice the time which you are inside so it is a delicated stuff. 

martes, 6 de marzo de 2012

Theme in Uglies

overcome fears:
- when they were in the ruins and you couldnt use your hoverboard anymore so tally had like to be really pacience and like she was really stressed but she made it

- in the rollercoaster, well that how they called it, and tally felled and everything so with that it was really stress


judge by what we see:
- when tally told shay that it was not only the outside, but the inside also counted.

- when tally also told shay that eventhough you had the opperation it will still be a part of you

friendship has obsticles:
- when all the things in the ruins happend that they made just like as they had different oppinions like just go and dont talk to each other anymore but instead they like talked it out and kept on going

- all abput like david and peris and like the personalities so they had to work for it