lunes, 31 de octubre de 2011
commercial analisis
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xWv1Wa9gybo
the commercial that i choose was about adidas, this is a very recognized brand in all the world.
style: they use a none word style with only music and really cool pictures. i think that they use this style for us to focus on the famous people who appear in this video insted of us focusing on words which wouldnt for my opinion make it that interesing.
voice: this commercial as i told you theres no talking so im gonna tell you that the voice they used was the music that was inspiring and like for me like athletic and you could like be like wohooo! with the rythm of the players.
p. o. v. : the point of view or like the meassge is like use adidas because many of the famous athlics use it so you can like become like them, they show you the best soccer player in the world; Messi, many good tennis players etc.
ethos: this video convinces and helps you get a big picture of all the good players that use adidas and it helps you see like omg they use it why dont we..
pathos: i think that what most inspires you is the pictures of like the action of the players and the the music helps you like get inside the image of the buying of adidas things.
logos: i thing that the facts are nthat the important of the famous people use it so its like a fact about buy it and you can feel really good. also the names that come at the end after the final slogone which is adidas is all in is really good because after showing pictures they say names :)
the commercial that i choose was about adidas, this is a very recognized brand in all the world.
style: they use a none word style with only music and really cool pictures. i think that they use this style for us to focus on the famous people who appear in this video insted of us focusing on words which wouldnt for my opinion make it that interesing.
voice: this commercial as i told you theres no talking so im gonna tell you that the voice they used was the music that was inspiring and like for me like athletic and you could like be like wohooo! with the rythm of the players.
p. o. v. : the point of view or like the meassge is like use adidas because many of the famous athlics use it so you can like become like them, they show you the best soccer player in the world; Messi, many good tennis players etc.
ethos: this video convinces and helps you get a big picture of all the good players that use adidas and it helps you see like omg they use it why dont we..
pathos: i think that what most inspires you is the pictures of like the action of the players and the the music helps you like get inside the image of the buying of adidas things.
logos: i thing that the facts are nthat the important of the famous people use it so its like a fact about buy it and you can feel really good. also the names that come at the end after the final slogone which is adidas is all in is really good because after showing pictures they say names :)
Ideas for campaign
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Ideas for Campaign
1. No to abortion: pro: kids have an oportunity to a life, to a succesful one. Con: the mother can have a future not being interupted by a child
2. Story about a mother who decided not to abort. Pro: convinces women abortion isn’t the right decision. Con: people are get scared to confront this problem.
3. Show the house and how it is organized and runned. Pro: make people see they can get help in good places. Con: not everyone nows it exists.
We chose the “no to abortion” because it is really sad to think that mothers are taking a posibility of life of their own child, when there are places for the children to have a succesful life.
Im doing my project with laura m and sofia
Ideas for Campaign
1. No to abortion: pro: kids have an oportunity to a life, to a succesful one. Con: the mother can have a future not being interupted by a child
2. Story about a mother who decided not to abort. Pro: convinces women abortion isn’t the right decision. Con: people are get scared to confront this problem.
3. Show the house and how it is organized and runned. Pro: make people see they can get help in good places. Con: not everyone nows it exists.
We chose the “no to abortion” because it is really sad to think that mothers are taking a posibility of life of their own child, when there are places for the children to have a succesful life.
Im doing my project with laura m and sofia
domingo, 30 de octubre de 2011
Sentences
Of!
1. Many people ould love to be a part of barcelona team.
2. Those shoes are made of lether
On!
1. That cat is on the table
2. Im on page 50 in my book
In!
1. My house is in a nice neighbord hood
2. That box was in the loby before i got it
For!
1. I wish that cupcake was for me
2. That card they gave me was for ms shawn
To!
1. I like to eat nutella
2. That movie was to much for me
At!
1. The party is at my place
2. Binacional games this year are at the school
From!
1. The card that was sent to ms shawn was frim her son.
2. Im going to go to miami and from there to ny and them back to bogota
1. Many people ould love to be a part of barcelona team.
2. Those shoes are made of lether
On!
1. That cat is on the table
2. Im on page 50 in my book
In!
1. My house is in a nice neighbord hood
2. That box was in the loby before i got it
For!
1. I wish that cupcake was for me
2. That card they gave me was for ms shawn
To!
1. I like to eat nutella
2. That movie was to much for me
At!
1. The party is at my place
2. Binacional games this year are at the school
From!
1. The card that was sent to ms shawn was frim her son.
2. Im going to go to miami and from there to ny and them back to bogota
Campaign topic
Out topic after discusing it alot laura mejia, sofia escobar and me came up with the idea of an fubdation thats called la madre del nino. De dicided it because lauras grandmother is the one who runs that fundarion.
This fundatioin is for kids in adoptation, i personally think that its really important to have places like that one because i think that everyone diserves opportunities and there they give kids alot of imortant things and an opportunity for life.
People should care about it because thise little kids diserve alot.
I really also like the mision of the fundation because its asureing that there priority is the kids and their willing to help them under every sircunstance.
This also has 70 years working so achange can rwally be done
It has about 70 kids living their
think this is a topic in which we can focus on so we help those kids, their we can make a change.
This fundatioin is for kids in adoptation, i personally think that its really important to have places like that one because i think that everyone diserves opportunities and there they give kids alot of imortant things and an opportunity for life.
People should care about it because thise little kids diserve alot.
I really also like the mision of the fundation because its asureing that there priority is the kids and their willing to help them under every sircunstance.
This also has 70 years working so achange can rwally be done
It has about 70 kids living their
think this is a topic in which we can focus on so we help those kids, their we can make a change.
Persuasion
Ethos: the way a person convinces an other person to belive in them on the way you look, your apperence, your profenalisn, if yiu are thoughtfull. Also if you know about what you are talking about and is youare prepared. E= expert
Pathos: emotional, values, beliefs. Emotions come in worda they create emotions and music. Pictures and that theycreate emotion
Logos: reasoning or logic is the most imporant its the clarity. Logical flow: stronginfo, logical arguments, examples, facts. Facts help increase thepoint of view. L= logic
Persuasion is an art.
Persuasion is sometimes unfair because sometimes itsnot oldthe entire story. They tell almost always the good part about the story not the bad one; thats called the unethical persuasion
It can be used negativly or positivley
Persuasion helps people change the world ( if its god) by telling quotes that they tell you and inspireqyou to now and do better.
Pathos: emotional, values, beliefs. Emotions come in worda they create emotions and music. Pictures and that theycreate emotion
Logos: reasoning or logic is the most imporant its the clarity. Logical flow: stronginfo, logical arguments, examples, facts. Facts help increase thepoint of view. L= logic
Persuasion is an art.
Persuasion is sometimes unfair because sometimes itsnot oldthe entire story. They tell almost always the good part about the story not the bad one; thats called the unethical persuasion
It can be used negativly or positivley
Persuasion helps people change the world ( if its god) by telling quotes that they tell you and inspireqyou to now and do better.
Style
The style is the combination of persons who you like for some time until you can see that something works better for you.
Styleis something you can copy.
Its the way you use your expressions
You cam define it like thing that inspire you, what by time makes up you
Styleis something you can copy.
Its the way you use your expressions
You cam define it like thing that inspire you, what by time makes up you
miércoles, 26 de octubre de 2011
horse video
style: i think that it uses a really like impactating, because of the way they did it, as imporant actors and people who want to make a diffrence.
voice: the kind of voice that they use is really like done the tone is not like happy is like thet giving a measge towards you and making you think about it.
point of view: the point of view of the poeple in the video is that we need to change becasue what were doing is so wrong and im complitly in the same opinion aas them.
in the video the music also helps to presuade people to dont dp what their doing, also the images which are really sad.
voice: the kind of voice that they use is really like done the tone is not like happy is like thet giving a measge towards you and making you think about it.
point of view: the point of view of the poeple in the video is that we need to change becasue what were doing is so wrong and im complitly in the same opinion aas them.
in the video the music also helps to presuade people to dont dp what their doing, also the images which are really sad.
5 very important elemts that a sotry should have!
symbolism: symbolism is a symbolo or an object that represents and abstract idea.
ex: in the movie we saw in class the cane of hera was a representation of her dad.
forceshadowing; where future events or perhaps the outcome in a sotry are suggested before they happen.
ex: in the movie we saw in class when at the beggining elizabeths starts ti imagine herself meating the queen, it haves us like a hit to what was going to happen in the future and it eventually happend she meat her.
flashback: type of narration where present actions is temporarly interupted and the reader can observe past events.
ex: in my book heaven is for real, once coloton was out of the hospital he many times remeber and started to discribe and everything the hospital in were he was.
plot twist: when things are going along in the plot and suddenly something so unexpected happens
ex: in the movie we saw everything was leading to elizabeth being the captain of the marching team, when suddenly she wasnt choose and her best friend annbel was the one choosen.
ex: in the movie we saw in class the cane of hera was a representation of her dad.
forceshadowing; where future events or perhaps the outcome in a sotry are suggested before they happen.
ex: in the movie we saw in class when at the beggining elizabeths starts ti imagine herself meating the queen, it haves us like a hit to what was going to happen in the future and it eventually happend she meat her.
flashback: type of narration where present actions is temporarly interupted and the reader can observe past events.
ex: in my book heaven is for real, once coloton was out of the hospital he many times remeber and started to discribe and everything the hospital in were he was.
plot twist: when things are going along in the plot and suddenly something so unexpected happens
ex: in the movie we saw everything was leading to elizabeth being the captain of the marching team, when suddenly she wasnt choose and her best friend annbel was the one choosen.
domingo, 23 de octubre de 2011
improvment- (needed to be done so grades could go up)
i need an upgrade becuase i was missing some things to do in this quarter.
i needed to put the link on little bird tales on my label projects, also i needed to add a label for vobabulary which i didnt have and do the flash cards, also add some posts to this new label.
for all future projects i will meat the deadline by starting to do all this work with more anticipation and to dont forget to label stuff. also be cheking constantlly standard score to see what missing and so, also if i have any douts to as ms shawn.
thanks and im sorry
i needed to put the link on little bird tales on my label projects, also i needed to add a label for vobabulary which i didnt have and do the flash cards, also add some posts to this new label.
for all future projects i will meat the deadline by starting to do all this work with more anticipation and to dont forget to label stuff. also be cheking constantlly standard score to see what missing and so, also if i have any douts to as ms shawn.
thanks and im sorry
final myth draft
CNG or Colegio Nueva Granada, an excellent school in Bogota. New year, august 15, new teachers, new students, new principal, and it seemed that the same old problem; lates. Micheal new student at CNG, he was perfect; tall, handsome, hot and one thing that made him amazing was that we was working to be the captain of the soccer team, he was just great at everything he did except for arriving on time to class.
As tardy’s where such a trouble in CNG there was this legendary discipline teacher who had work for many international schools by then. His name was Brad Bellick. He was really creepy. In all school assembly they were introducing all the new teachers when suddenly Bellicks name appeared, Micheal freaked out as he had been the last discipline teacher in Michael last school; Green Cove. Seconds after he just looked at his brother, best friends and everything to him ; Lincon. They were in complete shock…
After one week of Michael getting late to many of his classes and Bellick just wating for the best opportunity he had to torture and make Micheal suffer. Michael got late to his next class because he stayed talking after PE with Lincon about the resent dead of Micheal’s mother. Bellick called Michael to his office, Michael thought he had change and as he hold him to stay afterschool, he just thought it was a normal afterschool detention like in every school...
At 2 sharp, micheal arrived to Bellick’s office. At first everything was okay, as there was another kid called Theodore at detention, as soon as Theodore left that was abput 2:30 Bellick told Micheal to go outside and then he started to know that things were not okay. As soon as they got out to like the playground,, everyone at campus had left he started to sudddenly turn red, his vains poped 3d out of his face and a sudden lightning hitted the ground, as soon as it hitted it a crack started to happen, it was sucking everything one its path, and guess what the next thing on its path was Micheal, ground started to suck him, faster that what Micheal thought, as Bellick thought that the ground was going to kill Micheal he went away, when suddenly Micheal was struggeling for getting a knife which he had on his poket, but it wasn’t nesesary know. As with his elvos where pushing away the ground in a amazing way, he didn’t know where all his force was coming from, but he couldn’t control it, it was a lot!
After about 50 seconds after Micheal started to figure out that unnormal power, he managed to get out of the sucking ground. The second he got out of there he ran as fast as he could to get Bellick but it was way to fast. After he had seen that he had done he realized that he was running as fast as no one could, like que could really win a cheetah or something, but in a so fast way! Next day you just can´t imagine Bellick´s face as soon as he saw Micheal in a perfect shape. The day pased and Micheal wated till after school to go to Bellick´s office. As soon as he arrived there, Bellick just asked him, “ how, how did you get away with life if I had puted you a order to the gods to kill you?” Micheal just answered, “ well it seems that my mom who died few weeks just before this incident is Athenea goddness of the war, and that both children Micheal and Lincon will never loose a fight, and will punish those persons who tried to hurt Athenea´s little babys. So it seemed that Bellick was in for a treat.
As micheal and his mother where really close and could communicate anytime they wanted, Micheal asked her for a favor;the favor was for her to do a pack with Ades althought he wasn’t the best person who you could like to do pacts with but anyway Athenea could get Ades to help her and take Bellick to the under world, because remember no one messes up with to children of the gods. Bellick was really calmed and resting in his office when suddenly a fire started to come out of his bathroom, the entrance and the beginning of his terrible life in the under world was just beginning. Ades himself made Bellick do a quit letter so that no one would care where he could be…
Next day Micheal woke up, and he couldn’t belive himself he thought it wasn’t real that Bellick was finally gone and for good. A new detention teacher came, he was a really understanding teacher and a one with normal consequences. ;) that day Lincon and Micheal did the party of the year not only because Bellick was gone but because Micheal and all the soccer team had one the uncoli games and because they finally knew all that there mother was hidding from them, but that was only between the two brothers! And finnally it became a normal school just like al others! athenea would sometimes send Micheal news about bellick and let me tell you, oh they were so gorse and bad ones, but it was what de diserve, to bad he messed upp with th wrond ones.
As tardy’s where such a trouble in CNG there was this legendary discipline teacher who had work for many international schools by then. His name was Brad Bellick. He was really creepy. In all school assembly they were introducing all the new teachers when suddenly Bellicks name appeared, Micheal freaked out as he had been the last discipline teacher in Michael last school; Green Cove. Seconds after he just looked at his brother, best friends and everything to him ; Lincon. They were in complete shock…
After one week of Michael getting late to many of his classes and Bellick just wating for the best opportunity he had to torture and make Micheal suffer. Michael got late to his next class because he stayed talking after PE with Lincon about the resent dead of Micheal’s mother. Bellick called Michael to his office, Michael thought he had change and as he hold him to stay afterschool, he just thought it was a normal afterschool detention like in every school...
At 2 sharp, micheal arrived to Bellick’s office. At first everything was okay, as there was another kid called Theodore at detention, as soon as Theodore left that was abput 2:30 Bellick told Micheal to go outside and then he started to know that things were not okay. As soon as they got out to like the playground,, everyone at campus had left he started to sudddenly turn red, his vains poped 3d out of his face and a sudden lightning hitted the ground, as soon as it hitted it a crack started to happen, it was sucking everything one its path, and guess what the next thing on its path was Micheal, ground started to suck him, faster that what Micheal thought, as Bellick thought that the ground was going to kill Micheal he went away, when suddenly Micheal was struggeling for getting a knife which he had on his poket, but it wasn’t nesesary know. As with his elvos where pushing away the ground in a amazing way, he didn’t know where all his force was coming from, but he couldn’t control it, it was a lot!
After about 50 seconds after Micheal started to figure out that unnormal power, he managed to get out of the sucking ground. The second he got out of there he ran as fast as he could to get Bellick but it was way to fast. After he had seen that he had done he realized that he was running as fast as no one could, like que could really win a cheetah or something, but in a so fast way! Next day you just can´t imagine Bellick´s face as soon as he saw Micheal in a perfect shape. The day pased and Micheal wated till after school to go to Bellick´s office. As soon as he arrived there, Bellick just asked him, “ how, how did you get away with life if I had puted you a order to the gods to kill you?” Micheal just answered, “ well it seems that my mom who died few weeks just before this incident is Athenea goddness of the war, and that both children Micheal and Lincon will never loose a fight, and will punish those persons who tried to hurt Athenea´s little babys. So it seemed that Bellick was in for a treat.
As micheal and his mother where really close and could communicate anytime they wanted, Micheal asked her for a favor;the favor was for her to do a pack with Ades althought he wasn’t the best person who you could like to do pacts with but anyway Athenea could get Ades to help her and take Bellick to the under world, because remember no one messes up with to children of the gods. Bellick was really calmed and resting in his office when suddenly a fire started to come out of his bathroom, the entrance and the beginning of his terrible life in the under world was just beginning. Ades himself made Bellick do a quit letter so that no one would care where he could be…
Next day Micheal woke up, and he couldn’t belive himself he thought it wasn’t real that Bellick was finally gone and for good. A new detention teacher came, he was a really understanding teacher and a one with normal consequences. ;) that day Lincon and Micheal did the party of the year not only because Bellick was gone but because Micheal and all the soccer team had one the uncoli games and because they finally knew all that there mother was hidding from them, but that was only between the two brothers! And finnally it became a normal school just like al others! athenea would sometimes send Micheal news about bellick and let me tell you, oh they were so gorse and bad ones, but it was what de diserve, to bad he messed upp with th wrond ones.
miércoles, 19 de octubre de 2011
Analyzing!- other peoples projects
ana maria !
i really like how Ana putted every benchmark or every like section in a diffeerent place of like post so it was really organized. i also liked how she puted like cause and effect. it was a very good one for me.
ramon!
i liked that ramon uses especific pages to shpw examples of the book and also that he gives alot of details. really good.
alejandro samper!
the thing that i most liked about alejandros project was that for him to get a 3.5 or a 4 he did a letter to the author, that for me was a really creative thing to do! i thoyught it was awsome, that letter he did also for me was like kind of a recomendation! really really good!
the thing that i most liked about alejandros project was that for him to get a 3.5 or a 4 he did a letter to the author, that for me was a really creative thing to do! i thoyught it was awsome, that letter he did also for me was like kind of a recomendation! really really good!
worst audience behavior
for me the worst audience behavior is fooling araound with your peers, because i think that if you fool around you will eventually in sometime talk or even get to scream, also you will distract other people and aybe involve them in whats happening. so for me thats the worst thing you can do in a presentation or in a place.
i think that my behavior was good, it was a really interesting presesntation so i didnt need to talk or distract myself.
maybe i neeed to improve that if some talks to me i say no, whait till later and not respond the.
but i think it was pretty good.
i think that my behavior was good, it was a really interesting presesntation so i didnt need to talk or distract myself.
maybe i neeed to improve that if some talks to me i say no, whait till later and not respond the.
but i think it was pretty good.
heaven is for real- final project
understanding:
heaven is for real is one of the most amazing books i had ever read. not only becuase it has an amazing meassge but because its a true, real life book.
characteres: ALL the characters in my book are real, so i cant creitizes or anything, but i think that it was really good discribed and everything because as they were talking in 1 person and the narrator of the book is Todd who is the father of our main characters Colton; who is a small kid and grows thorughout the story. he is a little blonde boy.
plot: to find out the main problem of this book was nreally difficult but with some help it turned out that in some way it was heaven, not in a bad way because, well Colton got to meat Jesus but the rising actions for instance was Coloton getting really really sick and beacuse of a myricle not dying, but all this sickness that happend to Colton was for him to go to heaven. but as a really wierd thing happen, the solution of our problem was also heaven, because thanks that Colton went to heaven and after sometime he teaching everybody what he had learned in heaven and Jesus and everything it tought many people many things even his father you worked for the church. also as a solution to like the rasing action was that he went to heaven because he got to meat for instnce his grandfather who they called Pop that he couldnt meat him when his grandpa was alive because he died before Colton was born or a sister that he didnt knew he had who had died in Sonjas body while she was pregnant. this story is really suspence but like so sad suspence when Colton was sick because everything leaded form well ¨in the bad things¨ to worst! :(, but as i told you it was heaven what made up the story.
Applying:
in my book Colton who is the main character was a really sweet boy. i could tell that throughout all the story because he was always like with a positive attitude towards all his problems in the sickness that he had, also he was a very humble little boy because i think that as he had gone to heaven he could be like the more stuck up kid but no he was always welling to responde questions to who ever asked him about heaven and so.
in my book never happened what i thought was going to happen because it always changed it was really wierd but it was really good.
evaluating:
as i told you before this is one of the most amazing books i have ever read. it like seriouslly touched my heart. it was a really sad book it made me cried in some parts for example when hes so sick and they tell the mother Sonja and the sister Cassie and the father that the only thing they could do is pray, it made me cry. i would really recommend this book is really good and as i told before its a really story so that helped to know what where the real feeling of the family while going through all that pain, and also knowing exactly how Colton felt.
awsome book.
heaven is for real is one of the most amazing books i had ever read. not only becuase it has an amazing meassge but because its a true, real life book.
characteres: ALL the characters in my book are real, so i cant creitizes or anything, but i think that it was really good discribed and everything because as they were talking in 1 person and the narrator of the book is Todd who is the father of our main characters Colton; who is a small kid and grows thorughout the story. he is a little blonde boy.
plot: to find out the main problem of this book was nreally difficult but with some help it turned out that in some way it was heaven, not in a bad way because, well Colton got to meat Jesus but the rising actions for instance was Coloton getting really really sick and beacuse of a myricle not dying, but all this sickness that happend to Colton was for him to go to heaven. but as a really wierd thing happen, the solution of our problem was also heaven, because thanks that Colton went to heaven and after sometime he teaching everybody what he had learned in heaven and Jesus and everything it tought many people many things even his father you worked for the church. also as a solution to like the rasing action was that he went to heaven because he got to meat for instnce his grandfather who they called Pop that he couldnt meat him when his grandpa was alive because he died before Colton was born or a sister that he didnt knew he had who had died in Sonjas body while she was pregnant. this story is really suspence but like so sad suspence when Colton was sick because everything leaded form well ¨in the bad things¨ to worst! :(, but as i told you it was heaven what made up the story.
Applying:
in my book Colton who is the main character was a really sweet boy. i could tell that throughout all the story because he was always like with a positive attitude towards all his problems in the sickness that he had, also he was a very humble little boy because i think that as he had gone to heaven he could be like the more stuck up kid but no he was always welling to responde questions to who ever asked him about heaven and so.
in my book never happened what i thought was going to happen because it always changed it was really wierd but it was really good.
evaluating:
as i told you before this is one of the most amazing books i have ever read. it like seriouslly touched my heart. it was a really sad book it made me cried in some parts for example when hes so sick and they tell the mother Sonja and the sister Cassie and the father that the only thing they could do is pray, it made me cry. i would really recommend this book is really good and as i told before its a really story so that helped to know what where the real feeling of the family while going through all that pain, and also knowing exactly how Colton felt.
awsome book.
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