songs that have figurative language

onompnopeia: boom boom pow: Black eye peas

metaphor: super bass: nicky minaj

similie: super bass: nicky minaj

repetition: super bass: nicky minaj

rymhe: not afraid: eminem

personification: where are you chirstmas: grinch song

assonance: not afraid: eminem

alliteration: not afraid: eminem

imagery: deyfing gravity: wiked the musical

hyperbole: where is the love: black eye peas

math in nature!

wood:
the wood has patterns and that really matters, to make it beautiful like a golden uncirorn

mountains:
if you get lost, the mountains can guide you, as they have patterns all around you

leafs:
as it rains leafs fall down like a ball in the ground forming patterns all around

animals:
we can make the sun shine and the water crash and the animals in it dance

shells;
the shells smash sinking smothly sorounded by seahorses and the patters sink with them sitenlty

cabbage:
is the nmost beautiful leafs just cut it nin half and you will see

snowflakes are cornflakes falling in my bowl, making patters that form snow

lightning striting earths crust making patterns that are really fun

Trukeys
 are amazing animals adding fethers to their alusinating tail.

Math in nature- 10 ideas- chorus

1.patterns

2. fractas

3. Explain fractal

4. Picture

5. Explain picture

6. Explain the geometric shape thatis split into parts that are the same

7. Examples like:

8. Cabbage

9. Wood

10. Mountains

11.shells
leafs

Chorus!!! Inspired on the song Up by Justin Bieber

Its abig big world and nature is a part of it, if you look hard you will spy a fractal and its really magical!!!!!

vocab lesson 2

subvert: to ruin something
pic: Persians won and ruin the Athenes.


subservient: to serve excesivly
pic: a servant serving


contort: to do a unnormal shape with your body
pic: cirque du solei qierd people twisting


distort: turging something natural to something false.
pic: plastic surgeries


retort: to respond firmly and stongly
pic: yes, strong answer


tortuous: having many twists and turns
pic: trunss


adversity: hard
pic: jajaja


avert: turn away
pic: cartoon turning away


introvert: someone who cares are more important and are not opend that much
pic: ???


perverse: doing something thats noe resonable
pic: someone robbing


prose: someone who writes ryhmes really good
pic: dr seuss

topic

my topic is going to be math in nature.
i did some reserch and some points came up to be some ideas i can use for my poem !
patterns in growth
patterns in death
fibonacci
in animals
in plants

till know im not that sure abour what my topic is going to be about.. :S

song

Rolling in the deep

There's a fire starting in my heart,

Reaching a fever pitch and it's bring me out the dark.

Finally I can see you crystal clear

Go ahead and sell me out and I'll lay your ship bare.

See how I'll leave, with every piece of you

Don't underestimate the things that I will do.

There's a fire starting in my heart,

Reaching a fever pitch and it's bring me out the dark.

The scars of your love, remind me of us.

They keep me thinking that we almost had it all

The scars of your love, they leave me breathless

I can't help feeling

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

And you played it

To the beat

Baby I have no story to be told

But I've heard one of you and I'm gonna make your head burn,

Think of me in the depths of your despair

Making a home down there as mine sure won't be shared

The scars of your love, remind you of us.

They keep me thinking that we almost had it all

The scars of your love, they leave me breathless

I can't help feeling

We could have had it all

Adele Rolling In The Deep lyrics found on http://www.directlyrics.com/adelele-rolling-in-the-deep-lyrics.html

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

And you played it

To the beat

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

But you played it

With a beating

Throw your soul threw every open door

Count your blessings to find what you look for

Turn my sorrow into treasured gold

You pay me back in kind and reap just what you sow

We could have had it all

We could have had it all

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

And you played it to the beat

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

But you played it,

You played it,

You played it

You played it to the beat

notes on grinch

alliteration: sickly,sweet, nog, sucking cheer mongers
the baste the beast and the gulp of grog

onomonpeia: jo jo jo jo jo
whoo whoo whoo
tic toc tic toc

personification: the fire of love

hyperbole: grinchs speach to cindy lu

similie: she will be on me like fleegle flies

repetition: jury duty, jury duty, jury duty
hate hate hate hate hate double hate

2 personal topics

1. Soccer!
I know that girls long ago didnt olay soccer but now omg i love it! We the b team of CNG are playing the final on tuesday against another school from bogota thats los nogales, their really good although i think that we can make it :) but for me the best price that soccer has is BARCELoNA FC omg i love messi! Soccer helps me relax of everything, but i have a hit thats bithering me sometimes when i play thats like the wirst ever! Im really glad!! :)

2. Thanksgiving!
Turkey turkey turkey! Black friday black friday black friday! Vacation vacation vacation! Is like everything i loved combined! Im so glad that we have thanksgvigng in owr school, its a american holiday that i love! Its really fun but it should be longerr :). also i learned like the story that goes under thanksdigving which was in the all school assembly

Figurative language

Onomonopea: words as a sound
Pop

Metaphor: the comparisim of two things without using like or as
You are my sunshine

Simile: a comparisim of two things using like or as
Quiet as a mouse

Ryhme: the end of the sound us the same
Hall, ball, fall, doll

Personification: giving human qualities to non living things
The lamo sat in the table

Repetition: repiting a word more than twice
Baby baby baby

Hyoerbole: very big exageration
His the fastes runner in all the world

Alliteration: repetition of a constant
Peter piper oicked a peck of pickled peper

Assonance: repetition of a voule
He saw the ball far away

Imagery: appeal to senses to creat a picture in te readers mind

Final draft campaign

No to abortion! 

We can definetly make the world a better place if we can make people see that abotion is not the solution when a mother is pregant. 

Abortion is commiting murder from the point of view of not only me but many experts. Comiting abortion is when a mother decides that she is not going to have the baby she is carying inside her but she is going to kill the little baby who is forming inside her body. The way that mothers abort is by a sucking kind of pip which starts to suck the little baby peace by peace, its horrible so at the end shes not just killing her baby, but in a really cruel form. 

When mothers abort they dont only expiriences physical dameges like: cancer, ovarie cancer can happen and breast cancer also, if she wants to have other babies they may come out with some difficulties, and her health decreses alot. Not only is there physical damages but physhological also, mothers live there entire life with regrets eventhough she decidedd to kill her baby in that moment after she can regret, and that even can lead to suecide and many more things.

As we are telling you to NOT abort, there has to be a solution, and there is: many really important foundations such as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño which help mothers usally young aged that get pregnant to help them know that killing their babies is not the soultion but that they recive the babies they didnt abort and take them to adoptation so that they can make families who cant have babies happpy, and have a very goood life, La Casa de la Madre y el Niño garanties and makes sure that thiose kids who are being adopted recive exelent families and the life that they diserve. Thats a totally better soultion that killing a baby who can become something and someone in life. 

This is a foundation has been working since 1942, 70 years. Their vision is to strengthen the quality of service that they welcome people of different classes. There are about 65 kids since newborn babies until 8-year olds. La Casa de la Madre y el Niño has a team of highly qualified professionals consisting of: Pediatricians, nurses, psychologists, speech therapists, social workers, nutritionists, psychologists, occupational therapists, among others. Also assistants in the care of children, general service staff and kitchen, and group volunteers.

So as you can see killing a baby and it may be your own baby its not to option if their solutions that you can take, with the help of amazing foundations as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño life, happyness and no deaths can happen!

Analizing videos

Sofia E, Laura M and me
1. No to abortion
2. To dont abort
3. Pathos: music and pictures
Ethos: all the info about la casa de la madre y el niño
Logos: the testimony of the mother who didnt abort
4. Frist we talked about no to abortion and them the solutions and the options rather than abortion
5. yes, i think that the testimonies helped alot and the pathos also
6. Do a foundation or help la casa de la madre y el niño

Santiango S, Felipe A, Felipe I
1. Hunger
2. Its not fair
3. Ethos: money facts; what oeople spend on things like perfume will give food for many kids
Pathos: music, pictures
Logos: also the facts about money and the kids
4. First the problem and then how you can change
5. Yes, with the pictures however i think it could have been more longer, but i liked the style which was visuable
6. Help and make people see that they can spend less momney on things that are not important and insted in people who need it also publish it

lorenzo S
1. Bulling
2. Bulling is killing and its not acceptable
3. Ethos: the puctures of the kids who had suecide
Pathos: the song was perfect and the oictures as well
Logos: the kids who have suecide and not only that but who miss school because of fear
4. Facts and then pictures
5. Yes, the pictures and the style which was visuable
6. Put severe consequences for bullies

Daniel J
1. Pertoleum abuse
2. Petroleum abuse is really bad
3. Ethos: the facts and all the info
Pathos: the pictures and the video
Logos: facts and telling what had happend
4. Problem- explanation - solution
5. Well.. He could have added voce or music or something for it to be more interesting
6. Have another thing thats not oil

final poster

Poster analisis

Jeff- laura B
Interesting-
strength: they said it really clear and i liked the example
Weekness: if you saw the poster from far away it was alittle confusing because examples were like all over the place
Style-
Strength: they made it like visuable and the kind of letters were really good
Weekness: at some times there were to much words

Mark
Persuasive: he have many examples so it made people see that need to do things right was really important
Word choice: the words itself were alittle small but the way he organized it in boxes made it clear

Laura M- sofia- me
Persuasive- strength: it was made on a letter so i think that in that way people knew exactly what we are talking about
Word choice: weekness: the words were not that colorfull so that wouldnt catch your attention right away

Gabriel p- pablo c- rafa
Onteresting- weekness: i think that they shoukd have done like e prepositions bigger so it made it more interesting see what they were talking about
Style: they made it like in a comic style so you could see from far away and i said not only a comic style but rerally big and the comic was also the example

Lorenzo
Persuaisive- strength: he gave like an introductn so we could understand better what we were talking abkut so i really liked that oart, not only that but also the examples he used p, the picture of samara trlling " if you use these wrong ik kilk you" was really interesting also
Word choice- weekness: as it was in computer it was not that catching attention and small

Bernie- roberto- daniel
Interesting- strength: the oictures in representation of the examples were really goood becau you could see them because they were big and really clear and good
Word choice- weekness: some defenitions in the poster were in computer so they were farlly small and not that colorfull

Daniela- gabriela- maria
Word choice- strength: the glitter helped alot because it not only helped people see and be atracted to the posdter but it also helped the letter be bigger
Persuasive- weekness: i didnt understand that much the examples

Santiago- felipe a
Interesting- strength: the pictures helped catch your attention and like the divison between the two wors helped it be clear
Word choice- weekness: the words didnt have colors and they were small

Campaign final! - video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XZ3vH1kt2FE

Campaign essay- first draft

No to abortion!

We can defenetly make the world a better place if we can make people see that abotion is not the solution. If we can make the mothers see that aborting is not to only way.

Abortion is commiting murder since the point of view of not only me but many experts. Comiting abortion is when a mother disides that she is not going to have the baby she is carying inside her but she is going to kill the little baby which is forming inside her body. The way that mothers abort is by a sucking kind of pip which starts to suck the little baby peace by peace, ots horrible so at the end shes not just killing her baby, but in a really cruel form.

When mothers abort they dont only expiriences physical dameges like: cancer ovaries can happen and breast cancer also, if she wants to have other babies they may come out with some difficulties, and her health decreses alot. Not only is there physical damages but cicological also, mothers kive there entire life with regrets eventhough she decidedd to kill her baby in that moment after she can regret, and that even can lead to suecide and many things more.

As we are tlling you to NOT abort, there has to be a solution, and there is: many really important foundations such as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño which help mothers usally young aged that get oregnant to help them know that killing their babies is not the soultion but that they recive the babies they didnt abort and take them to adoptation so that they can make families who cant have babies happpy, and have a very goood life, La Casa de la Madre y el Niño garanties and makes sure that thiose kids who are being adopted recive exelent families and the life that they disere. Thats a totally better soultion that killing a baby who can become something and smeone in life.

This is a foundation has been working since 1942, 70 years. Their vision is to strengthen the quality of service that they welcome people of different classes. There are about 65 kids since newborn babies until 8-year olds. La Casa de la Madre y el Niño has a team of highly qualified professionals consisting of: Pediatricians, nurses, psychologists, speech therapists, social workers, nutritionists, psychologists, occupational therapists, among others. Also assistants in the care of children, general service staff and kitchen, and group volunteers.

So as you can see killing a baby and it may be your own baby its not to option if their solutions that you can take, with the help of amazing foundations as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño life, happyness and no deaths can happen!

Story board campaign pic

Mind map TO and FROM

9 facts and 3 sources

this are 9 facts about why you shouldnt abort!

facts
1. you can recive many vaginal infections.
2. mothers can regret killing their son or daughter for all their lives
3. that regret can cause suicide
4. breast cancer
5. worst health can happen
6. cancer of ovaries
7. dangerous effects on the uterus
8. other babies if they decide to have later on can de born with deformations
9. un born babies should have the privelge to live and they are totally un defense

sources
1. la casa de la madre y el nino
2. Lorena Vargas ( administrator of la casa de la madre y el nino )
3. Amparo ( social manager of la casa del madre y el nino
4. testimonies of mothers

campaign mind map

game!

commercial analisis

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xWv1Wa9gybo

the commercial that i choose was about adidas, this is a very recognized brand in all the world.

style: they use a none word style with only music and really cool pictures. i think that they use this style for us to focus on the famous people who appear in this video insted of us focusing on words which wouldnt for my opinion make it that interesing.

voice: this commercial as i told you theres no talking so im gonna tell you that the voice they used was the music that was inspiring and like for me like athletic and you could like be like wohooo! with the rythm of the players.

p. o. v. : the point of view or like the meassge is like use adidas because many of the famous athlics use it so you can like become like them, they show you the best soccer player in the world; Messi, many good tennis players etc.

ethos: this video convinces and helps you get a big picture of all the good players that use adidas and it helps you see like omg they use it why dont we..

pathos: i think that what most inspires you is the pictures of like the action of the players and the the music helps you like get inside the image of the buying of adidas things.

logos: i thing that the facts are nthat the important of the famous people use it so its like a fact about buy it and you can feel really good. also the names that come at the end after the final slogone which is adidas is all in is really good because after showing pictures they say names :)

Ideas for campaign

Text
Ideas for Campaign
1. No to abortion: pro: kids have an oportunity to a life, to a succesful one. Con: the mother can have a future not being interupted by a child
2. Story about a mother who decided not to abort. Pro: convinces women abortion isn’t the right decision. Con: people are get scared to confront this problem.
3. Show the house and how it is organized and runned. Pro: make people see they can get help in good places. Con: not everyone nows it exists.
We chose the “no to abortion” because it is really sad to think that mothers are taking a posibility of life of their own child, when there are places for the children to have a succesful life.

Im doing my project with laura m and sofia

Of, About, On, In, For, To, At, From PIC!!!!

Sentences

Of!
1. Many people ould love to be a part of barcelona team.
2. Those shoes are made of lether

On!
1. That cat is on the table
2. Im on page 50 in my book

In!
1. My house is in a nice neighbord hood
2. That box was in the loby before i got it

For!
1. I wish that cupcake was for me
2. That card they gave me was for ms shawn

To!
1. I like to eat nutella
2. That movie was to much for me

At!
1. The party is at my place
2. Binacional games this year are at the school

From!
1. The card that was sent to ms shawn was frim her son.
2. Im going to go to miami and from there to ny and them back to bogota

Campaign topic

Out topic after discusing it alot laura mejia, sofia escobar and me came up with the idea of an fubdation thats called la madre del nino. De dicided it because lauras grandmother is the one who runs that fundarion.
This fundatioin is for kids in adoptation, i personally think that its really important to have places like that one because i think that everyone diserves opportunities and there they give kids alot of imortant things and an opportunity for life.
People should care about it because thise little kids diserve alot.
I really also like the mision of the fundation because its asureing that there priority is the kids and their willing to help them under every sircunstance.
This also has 70 years working so achange can rwally be done
It has about 70 kids living their
think this is a topic in which we can focus on so we help those kids, their we can make a change.

Persuasion

Ethos: the way a person convinces an other person to belive in them on the way you look, your apperence, your profenalisn, if yiu are thoughtfull. Also if you know about what you are talking about and is youare prepared. E= expert

Pathos: emotional, values, beliefs. Emotions come in worda they create emotions and music. Pictures and that theycreate emotion

Logos: reasoning or logic is the most imporant its the clarity. Logical flow: stronginfo, logical arguments, examples, facts. Facts help increase thepoint of view. L= logic

Persuasion is an art.

Persuasion is sometimes unfair because sometimes itsnot oldthe entire story. They tell almost always the good part about the story not the bad one; thats called the unethical persuasion

It can be used negativly or positivley

Persuasion helps people change the world ( if its god) by telling quotes that they tell you and inspireqyou to now and do better.

Style

The style is the combination of persons who you like for some time until you can see that something works better for you.
Styleis something you can copy.
Its the way you use your expressions
You cam define it like thing that inspire you, what by time makes up you

horse video

style: i think that it uses a really like impactating, because of the way they did it, as imporant actors and people who want to make a diffrence.

voice: the kind of voice that they use is really like done the tone is not like happy is like thet giving a measge towards you and making you think about it.

point of view: the point of view of the poeple in the video is that we need to change becasue what were doing is so wrong and im complitly in the same opinion aas them.

in the video the music also helps to presuade people to dont dp what their doing, also the images which are really sad.

5 very important elemts that a sotry should have!

symbolism: symbolism is a symbolo or an object that represents and abstract idea.
 ex: in the movie we saw in class the cane of hera was a representation of her dad.

forceshadowing; where future events or perhaps the outcome in a sotry are suggested before they happen.
ex: in the movie we saw in class when at the beggining elizabeths starts ti imagine herself meating the queen, it haves us like a hit to what was going to happen in the future and it eventually happend she meat her.

flashback: type of narration where present actions is temporarly interupted and the reader can observe past events.
ex: in my book heaven is for real, once coloton was out of the hospital he many times remeber and started to discribe and everything the hospital in were he was.

plot twist: when things are going along in the plot and suddenly something so unexpected happens
ex: in the movie we saw everything was leading to elizabeth being the captain of the marching team, when suddenly she wasnt choose and her best friend annbel was the one choosen.

improvment- (needed to be done so grades could go up)

i need an upgrade becuase i was missing some things to do in this quarter.
i needed to put the link on little bird tales on my label projects, also i needed to add a label for vobabulary which i didnt have and do the flash cards, also add some posts to this new label.

for all future projects i will meat the deadline by starting to do all this work with more anticipation and to dont forget to label stuff. also be cheking constantlly standard score to see what missing and so, also if i have any douts to as ms shawn.
thanks and im sorry

flash cards

http://quizlet.com/7433415/vocabulary-section-1-and-2-flash-cards/

final myth draft

CNG or Colegio Nueva Granada, an excellent school in Bogota. New year, august 15, new teachers, new students, new principal, and it seemed that the same old problem; lates. Micheal new student at CNG, he was perfect; tall, handsome, hot and one thing that made him amazing was that we was working to be the captain of the soccer team, he was just great at everything he did except for arriving on time to class.

As tardy’s where such a trouble in CNG there was this legendary discipline teacher who had work for many international schools by then. His name was Brad Bellick. He was really creepy. In all school assembly they were introducing all the new teachers when suddenly Bellicks name appeared, Micheal freaked out as he had been the last discipline teacher in Michael last school; Green Cove. Seconds after he just looked at his brother, best friends and everything to him ; Lincon. They were in complete shock…

After one week of Michael getting late to many of his classes and Bellick just wating for the best opportunity he had to torture and make Micheal suffer. Michael got late to his next class because he stayed talking after PE with Lincon about the resent dead of Micheal’s mother. Bellick called Michael to his office, Michael thought he had change and as he hold him to stay afterschool, he just thought it was a normal afterschool detention like in every school...

At 2 sharp, micheal arrived to Bellick’s office. At first everything was okay, as there was another kid called Theodore at detention, as soon as Theodore left that was abput 2:30 Bellick told Micheal to go outside and then he started to know that things were not okay. As soon as they got out to like the playground,, everyone at campus had left he started to sudddenly turn red, his vains poped 3d out of his face and a sudden lightning hitted the ground, as soon as it hitted it a crack started to happen, it was sucking everything one its path, and guess what the next thing on its path was Micheal, ground started to suck him, faster that what Micheal thought, as Bellick thought that the ground was going to kill Micheal he went away, when suddenly Micheal was struggeling for getting a knife which he had on his poket, but it wasn’t nesesary know. As with his elvos where pushing away the ground in a amazing way, he didn’t know where all his force was coming from, but he couldn’t control it, it was a lot!

After about 50 seconds after Micheal started to figure out that unnormal power, he managed to get out of the sucking ground. The second he got out of there he ran as fast as he could to get Bellick but it was way to fast. After he had seen that he had done he realized that he was running as fast as no one could, like que could really win a cheetah or something, but in a so fast way! Next day you just can´t imagine Bellick´s face as soon as he saw Micheal in a perfect shape. The day pased and Micheal wated till after school to go to Bellick´s office. As soon as he arrived there, Bellick just asked him, “ how, how did you get away with life if I had puted you a order to the gods to kill you?” Micheal just answered, “ well it seems that my mom who died few weeks just before this incident is Athenea goddness of the war, and that both children Micheal and Lincon will never loose a fight, and will punish those persons who tried to hurt Athenea´s little babys. So it seemed that Bellick was in for a treat.

As micheal and his mother where really close and could communicate anytime they wanted, Micheal asked her for a favor;the favor was for her to do a pack with Ades althought he wasn’t the best person who you could like to do pacts with but anyway Athenea could get Ades to help her and take Bellick to the under world, because remember no one messes up with to children of the gods. Bellick was really calmed and resting in his office when suddenly a fire started to come out of his bathroom, the entrance and the beginning of his terrible life in the under world was just beginning. Ades himself made Bellick do a quit letter so that no one would care where he could be…

Next day Micheal woke up, and he couldn’t belive himself he thought it wasn’t real that Bellick was finally gone and for good. A new detention teacher came, he was a really understanding teacher and a one with normal consequences. ;) that day Lincon and Micheal did the party of the year not only because Bellick was gone but because Micheal and all the soccer team had one the uncoli games and because they finally knew all that there mother was hidding from them, but that was only between the two brothers! And finnally it became a normal school just like al others! athenea would sometimes send Micheal news about bellick and let me tell you, oh they were so gorse and bad ones, but it was what de diserve, to bad he messed upp with th wrond ones.

little bird tales

http://littlebirdtales.com/tales/view/story_id/34661/preview/true/

heaven is for real - creating!!

check out real images and videos of colton and his familyy!

Analyzing!- other peoples projects

ana maria !

i really like how Ana putted every benchmark or every like section in a diffeerent place of like post so it was really organized. i also liked how she puted like cause and effect. it was a very good one for me. 

ramon!

i liked that ramon uses especific pages to shpw examples of the book and also that he gives alot of details. really good. 

alejandro samper!
the thing that i most liked about alejandros project was that for him to get a 3.5 or a 4 he did a letter to the author, that for me was a really creative thing to do! i thoyught it was awsome, that letter he did also for me was like kind of a recomendation! really really good! 

worst audience behavior

for me the worst audience behavior is fooling araound with your peers, because i think that if you fool around you will eventually in sometime talk or even get to scream, also you will distract other people and aybe involve them in whats happening. so for me thats the worst  thing you can do in a presentation or in a place.
i think that my behavior was good, it was a really interesting presesntation so i didnt need to talk or distract myself.
maybe i neeed to improve that if some talks to me i say no, whait till later and not respond the.
but i think it was pretty good.

heaven is for real- final project

understanding:
heaven is for real is one of the most amazing books i had ever read. not only becuase it has an amazing meassge but because its a true, real life book.
characteres: ALL the characters in my book are real, so i cant creitizes or anything, but i think that it was really good discribed and everything because as they were talking in 1 person and the narrator of the book is Todd who is the father of our main characters Colton; who is a small kid and grows thorughout the story. he is a little blonde boy.
plot: to find out the main problem of this book was nreally difficult but with some help it turned out that in some way it was heaven, not in a bad way because, well Colton got to meat Jesus but the rising actions for instance was Coloton getting really really sick and beacuse of a myricle not dying, but all this sickness that happend to Colton was for him to go to heaven. but as a really wierd thing happen, the solution of our problem was also heaven, because thanks that Colton went to heaven and after sometime he teaching everybody what he had learned in heaven and Jesus and everything it tought many people many things even his father you worked for the church. also as a solution to like the rasing action was that he went to heaven because he got to meat for instnce his grandfather who they called Pop that he couldnt meat him when his grandpa was alive because he died before Colton was born or a sister that he didnt knew he had who had died in Sonjas body while she was pregnant. this story is really suspence but like so sad suspence when Colton was sick because everything leaded form well ¨in the bad things¨ to worst! :(, but as i told you it was heaven what made up the story.

Applying:
in my book Colton who is the main character was a really sweet boy. i could tell that throughout all the story because he was always like with a positive attitude towards all his problems in the sickness that he had, also he was a very humble little boy because i think that as he had gone to heaven he could be like the more stuck up kid but no he was always welling to responde questions to who ever asked him about heaven and so.
in my book never happened what i thought was going to happen because it always changed it was really wierd but it was really good.

evaluating:
as i told you before this is one of the most amazing books i have ever read. it like seriouslly touched my heart. it was a really sad book it made me cried in some parts for example when hes so sick and they tell the mother Sonja and the sister Cassie and the father that the only thing they could do is pray, it made me cry. i would really recommend this book is really good and as i told before its a really story so that helped to know what where the real feeling of the family while going through all that pain, and also knowing exactly how Colton felt.
awsome book.

Vocabulary lesson 1-2

PER

1. Percussion- the sharp striking of one thing against another- small children use kitchen pots and pans as percussion instruments
In a band theres many percussion instruments

2. Perennial- lasting for an indefinitely long time- a perennial remark of parents " things were diffrent when i was your age"
A perennial statment that almost all teachers say at somenpoint " hold your horses"

3. Permeate- to penetrate through spaces; to spread throughout.- pollution from automobiles and smokestacks permeates the air in many cities, causing health problems for people and contributing to the deterioration of enviorment.
When you fight with someone the anger permeates for a long time

4. Persevere- to hold fast to a task or purpose despite handicaps or obstacles.- elizabeth blackwell, the first woman doctor n the united states, presevered despite ridcule and
exclusion from the medical profession.
Presidents peesevere for handicap people special vans

FERo, FERRE, TULI, LATUM

5. Defer- to postpone; delay - schools and colleges sometimes defer admission, accepting students later the year.
I never like to defer my doctors apointments

6. Dilatory- tending ti delay or postpone- in one aesop's fables the dilatory hare loses the race to the perserving tortoise.
My mom is a very dilatory person.

7. Elation- excited feelings to pride, triumph or happiness- many americans felt elation when two apollo astronauts took their first steps on the moon on 1969

8. Infer- to use available evidence to form a conclusion. - the jury inferred from the testimony that defendant becuase they werer celebrities.
In my english assistemnt they made me infer frm the book

Character summary

Elemnts of story: to make a good story and one thats complete you need to have many things;
Plot: the plot of a story is is main or the biggest problem of the story! Is the one im wich the character sufurs the most it also is when the atory statts to get very interesting because something is going wrong!

myth description!

1. exposition:
setting: cng middle school and the olympus
main characters: micheal, mr bellick, god afrodite, other students
dilema: micheal gets late always
myth: real or made up person, how people lived
character: looks, talent, ambition

2. rising action:
gets worst when mr bellick arrived
myth: how to or how not to behave
character: ambition, best friend, worst enemy

3. climax:
mr bellick made the ground suck and electrecut students: suddenly light went out so no electrocutation and no more souking all thanks to the gods.
myth: natural plenomena, how to or how not to behave
character: worst enemy, secret

4. falling action:
gods hated that they turtured kids, athenea mpre than others and saved them and brought micheal to the olympus and have him the power of speed and the poswer of strengh
myth: to scare or control people, natural plenomena
character: looks, carry in pocket

5. resolution:
problem solved mr bellick expolsed out of school and  micheal with a clean record and with powers.
myth: social structure
character: talent, looks

characterization and plot!

characterizations: who is your main character?

traits- yor characters looks, what he lloks like discirbe him.

talent: whats the thing that he does the best

ambition: the characters goal, whats he desprate looking for

secret: a deep dark secret that he has, something that no one but himself knows.

best friend: who his best friend?

worst enemy: who is his worst enemy?

name: what does his name represent, almost all names have an especial meaning in a boook so which one is yours?

lost recently: what did the character lost recently that means alot to them

try in your book to discribe as much as possible!!!!!!!!!!

plot! whats the problem in your story?


the dilema!


the climax


the raising action 


ralling action

Character discription

Michael:

Looks: mysterious
Big
Tall
Blue eyes
Handsome
Prepy(lilpke perfect)

Talent: having girlfriends
Soccer
REALLY inteligent

Ambition: not get late
Captain of soccer

Deep dark secret: everybody think he isbso rich because he goes to the best school best cloth etc but hes actually going thriw economic problems

Best friend: lincon

What do they carry in their pocket: blackberry
Cash

What have they lost recently: dad in jail

Worst enemy: mr bellick

Name: micheal becuase theres this series called prison break and the main character is called micheal and i love him

Quiz summary

Which, that and who
1. my answer was right!
2. My answer was right
3. Wrong i puted That but it was which
4. My answer was right
5. My qnswer was right
6. Wrong; i puted that but it was which
7. My answer was right
8. My answer was right
9. My answer was right
10. My answer was right


Reparing run on sentances
1. My answer was right
2. Wrong; i puted ; put it was ,
3. My answer was right
4. my answer was right
5. My answer was right
6. My answer was right
7. Wrong; i opputed it was corrwct but it wasnt It was person;all
8. My answer was right
9. My answer was right
10. Wrong; i puted it was right but it was actually divine, so
8.

brainstorm myth

tardies: 

characters: theodore 

                 god Afridota

                 other students

                 brad bellick

setting: cng middle school

problem: getting late

              gettin detentions 

              other students

solution: god Afrodita gives him the power of speed and districion. 

elements: how people lived

               how to or how not to behave

               real or made up person  

               social structure

               to control people 

bulling: 

characters: miley

                justin 

                selena

                teachers 

                gods 

setting: cng middle school 

problem: justin and selena bulling miley in a terrible way

solution: gods made miley beatiful and excelent like sentimentaly tough and got her to talk about what they were doing to her. 

elements:  how people lived

               how to behave or how not to behave

               real or made up person

               social structre

               control people

injustice: 

characters: teachers

                students 

                director 

                gods 

                new director

setting: cng middle school

problem: the teachers and director where being terrible with the students that they didnt like, they  where having terrible punishments for them including killing them. 

solution: gods have them a new director who measured and could see if they where lieing or telling the truth. 

elements: how people lived

              how to behave or how not to behave

              made up or real character

              social structre 

book trailer The War of the Worlds

i didnt read the book the war of the worlds, i read the wizard of oz but rafael and me dicieded to do it about the War of the Worlds.
in this tumblr is the trailer!


http://raecha.tumblr.com/

difference detween ¨that¨and ¨who¨

the difference between that and how is that in a sentence like, my brother brought me that pencil case from Argentina is telling something like if you were  pointing at something or someone and the word who in a senctence like, do you know who took my notebook is like telling who as a person.
run on sentance: a run on sentance is two sentances that are combined together without separationg by a period, comma conjuction or semicolon.

problems in middle school!

in middle school theres many problems.

1. bulling!!! i personally think that bulling is the most terrible of all the problems that middle school can have, because its the point when the persons are assing throw a very ruf time it can be family, friends, boyfriends or so but theres many proven examples where suecide is comited because of bulling.. i personally never had been bullied so i cant give an personal opinion towards how it feels but it must fell auful! i think that bulling is very hard to handle.
2. responsability: i think that responsability is a huge problem in middle school well kids are in this moment of life well not all but many looking for difrent things and not always bbeing responsable! por example with homework with hours with every and thats really bad. also one in this school is the getting late to class that has to do with responsability but anyways is a big one in this school.
3. excuses: one big problem is excuses eventhough sometimes their true know teahers wont belie them! :( but its true and cant deny it that excusses are a very common thing in middle school.

theres many other problems theres so many that i cant count but to me this are some of the most important ones. !

story board

1 scene: the tornado when yhey get to Oz
2: starts of the yellow brick road 
3: scarecrow
4. Tinman
5. Lion 
6. Esmerald city
7. Oz 
8. Theres no place like home

The Wizard of Oz

the wizard of oz is a piction story. this book is about Dorothy a girl from Kansas  and her dog Toto who was in a Tornado, she couldnt enter the place where they hidded from them so she just suddendly appierd in the land of munchkins. then all those little men told Dorothy that her house had just killed the wiked witch of the east, she had those silver shoes o her. then Glinda a good witch came and it all maked sence. well it seemed that the personn who had killed the wiked witch will be the one who kept those powerful shoes. Dprpthy asked how could she get back to Kansas and Glinda said only following the yellow brick road. that when the wiked witch of the west should up. the couldnt to anything to Dorothy in Munchkin land but once she got out of there to her way to the esmerald city the wiked witch could do anything.

on her way tp se Oz which was the only person that could help Dorothy go back home. gettin out of Munchkin land. On her way she meets a Scarecrow who needs a brain, a Tin Man who wants a heart, and a Cowardly Lion who desperately needs courage. finally they make their way to the esmerald city, with their only protection the ruby silver shoes.

once they get to the esmerald city the supose wonderful wizard tells them the only way he can make al their need and wishes is if they kill the wiked witch of the east, beacuse it it was all a failer the wonder full supose wiard seems like i just a normal person, Dorothy and her friends discover that before they get to the witch? or will she get them? or i heard it was only a dream a very bad dream…

main idea: i think that the main idea of the story is throw everything Dorothy has to pass until she gets to esmerald city, the wiked which was to to alot with this. for example throw all the yellow brick road.

plot: the plot is first of all well that dorothy eventually ended in the munchkin land so thats the first one the second one is the witch everything has to do with her, shes so bad. well and at the end it  i think that everything becuase it was all related and throw everythong that Dorothy, Toto and the others had to go throw.

characters: the main characters where:

Dorothy

the wiked witch of the west

Toto

Scarecrow

Tin man

Lion

Wizard of Oz

theme: i think that the most important theme or lesson is that no matter what you think you have or dont have you have to trust on yourself and be the best of you. i know that becuase the scarecrow becuase he tought he didnt have brain and he was the most inteligent of gruop.

conections: the connections that i made where mostly with the movie, in the movie the shoes that belonged to the witch where red and in the book silver. i also made a connections thats well i saw the musical of broadway Wiked thats the sotry about the wiked which, so i after saw it i know shes not that bad.

recomendations: i recomend this book, its very interesting and i think thats a great story with may details.

new tittle: if i couldnt call ir the Wizard of Oz that i think its a perfect name i could call it the yellow brick road.

setting: it frst takes place in kansas but then it moves to well the land of Oz.

:)

about me :)

Well, my name is Mariana Romero im 13 years old and my birthday is on January 10. In my family my 2 brothers and myself love to play soccer, i just love it. As i love playing it i love watching it i LOVE Lionel Messi and im a huge fan of Barcelona team. i also consider myself a very hapy girl, trying always to be in my best positive attitude and looking towards to my english class. Ms Shawn if you want to see me as something you can call me the girl that loves messi! thats pretty much about me, well i also like alot to spend time with people not only friends but family and people in need. i dont like to read that much and i hope that can be changed this year.

Mariana.