http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMneh0V7WGU
lunes, 4 de junio de 2012
martes, 29 de mayo de 2012
final review 4
Lost Boy, Lost Girl (escaping the civil war in sudan) is a book that is based on a true story. This story is told by John Bul Dau and Martha Arual Akech. This war is in Sudan. Throughout all the sotry you will listen to both Marthas and Johns point of view of what was going on. They lived in their normal lifes with their family unitl one day they started to hear people dieying, so they both runed away. The 2 of them runed in difrent ways but they both happened the same thing which was that they couldn’t get a good and stable place to live because everytime they arrived somewhere they though they would be safe the camp would get destroy. Many terrible things happened like new diseases and many more until finally Martha moved to the USA, not long after John moved. They started to get education, live normal lifes without running away like they used to and in the end they started dating, got married, had kids and could life really happy with their families. I really liked this book also because you could compare the two stories at the same time and look what are the differences that they lived both in the same war only that in different camps or moving to different places, and see how they were meant to be together and found themselves.
This book I recommend to a very large audience, because as it’s the point of view of a man and a women at the same time, men and women audience would really like it because it states both points of views and many times you don't like books because its to girl stuff of boy but this one is a mixture of both. I would not recommend it to small child because the atmosphere is really hard sometimes and people who cant tolerate and are not mature enough would probably don’t like it.
lunes, 28 de mayo de 2012
feedback to peer 3.5
http://englishblog-daniela.tumblr.com/
feedback gave to me, by Daniela Cañas:
Daniela read the same
book as me both by recomendation of Ms. Shawn.
i think that the vocabulary words that you choose were
really good and the deffenitions were brief and to the point. They sentences were also good
and made sense with the definitions below. The comparisons of the words were
also good they were simple topics but topics which you used in daily life so that
were easier to understand. The review was also really good, although I would
add to it the recommendation of people who should read this book.
feedback gave to me, by Daniela Cañas:
i liked how she put
effort in there definitions and made her sentences really clear and able to
understand what word she used to replace it.i think it is a great job and the
creativity she used to made the diagram was amazing i would never think about
doing it actually like that. to improve their is not much actually just review
some sentences that she didn't replaced the word i think in one but i really
like her work over all
review 3
Lost Boy,
Lost Girl (escaping the civil war in sudan) is a book that is based on a true
story. This story is told by John Bul Dau and Martha Arual Akech. This war is
in Sudan. Throughout all the sotry you will listen to both Marthas and Johns
point of view of what was going on. They lived in their normal
lifes with their family unitl one day they started to hear people dieying, so they both runed
away. The 2 of them runed in difrent ways but they both happened the same thing
which was that they couldn’t get a good and stable place to live because
everytime they arrived somewhere they though they would be safe the camp would
get destroy. Many terrible things happened like new diseases and many more
until finally Martha moved to the USA, not long after John moved. They started
to get education, live normal lifes without running away like they used to and
in the end they started dating, got married, had kids and could life really
happy with their families.
This book I recommend to a very large audience,
because as it’s the point of view of a man and a women at the same time, men
and women audience would really like it because it states both points of views.
I would not recommend it to small child because the atmosphere is really hard
sometimes and people who cant tolerate and are not mature enough would probably
don’t like it.
own sentences 2
As the
men of my village leaned
down with
their spears pointed at the center of the circle, Aller-Manuguak and another
runner rushed straight at the lion.
My father
was a policeman, but early in the morning before he went to work the burning sun was very high in the sky, he and my
mother would take Tabithia and me with them while they worked in the garden
they had not far from our house.
Those beliefs
still remain when I was a child, even in the cities
like Juba.
I heard
a huge crackling sound like some giant tree being separated in the forest.
We had
nothing to eat for a long time until Abraham found pumpkin and a plant that looked similar to an onion.
The group that joined us began to reduce away.
We watched that big long snake crawl away, but luckily it wasn’t poisonous.
She was shaking, but she slowly,
quietly camouflaged
into the bushed to hide.
Most of the people in my group got
it at some time or other, because mosquitoes carry it and they always are following us.
The strange thing was that the
whole terrible attack scared my sickness away, and I was able to keep going, even
when we had to cross a muddy area, where we sank up to out knees and the elders
had to drag us kids through the tiny opening.
Men from the SPLA were there,and
the villages gave us milk and grain which we could eat and a grain which syrup is made of.
If we made it that far , the chasing armies would not follow us.
The truck bounced and shook us along some very bad roads, but we arrived safely at Kakuma.
Food was not enough, but we shared what he had with other
members of the group.
my own defenition of vocab words 1.5
knelt- the past tens of kneeling.
Scorching- when something is burning or its
really hot
Lingered- to stay or remain
Splintered- a small thin object which has
separated from the bigger object
Amochro- short plant, that looks like an
onion
Dwindle- to become smaller and smaller
Slither- when you slide along something
many times creating noise
Crept- past tens of creep; to move close to
the ground like an insect does
Pestering- to bother someone repitetly to
talk about your problems
Ooze- to wlak slowly through a small and
tiny opening
Millet- a grain used for humans to eat
Sorghum- grain which syrup is made of
Pursuing- to follow something reallly close
Jolted- to shake something and cause it to
move
Scarce- not enough
domingo, 27 de mayo de 2012
Vocabulary 1
knelt- 11
Scorching- 18
Lingered- 19
Splintered- 28
Amochro- 30
Dwindle- 33
Slither- 37
Crept- 40
Pestering- 41
Ooze- 42
Millet- 43
Sorghum- 43
Pursuing- 85
Jolted- 96
scarce- 100
Scorching- 18
Lingered- 19
Splintered- 28
Amochro- 30
Dwindle- 33
Slither- 37
Crept- 40
Pestering- 41
Ooze- 42
Millet- 43
Sorghum- 43
Pursuing- 85
Jolted- 96
scarce- 100
miércoles, 23 de mayo de 2012
school
who is your audience?
- families to see what we offer for their kids
what is your voice?
- persuasive voice, convinsing one
what is your dramatic question?
- 1. do you think your kids showed whait until their 18 to be prepered for their fufure?
2. has collage be difficult for your sister brother or anyone? will you like for it for you to be easier?
- tell what de offer.
who will this help?
- students
obsticles?
- that they are not ready to choose a carrer
solve: giving other options until they get ready
evidence?
- its better to take each student at a time
- people most offten succeed when they are prepaered to do something or for whats coming
- mayority of the schools are now trying to prepare ids to see what oportunities they have.
why would
-students? because then they know that they are going to be and are prepared
-parents? they can avoid having to pay more money for collage and new carrers
-teachers? because they only teach what they are good at or like to and get to know their students really well
-adim? they will gain more money and the school will be more professional
sounds?
- insipiring songs
story?
- commerical
- families to see what we offer for their kids
what is your voice?
- persuasive voice, convinsing one
what is your dramatic question?
- 1. do you think your kids showed whait until their 18 to be prepered for their fufure?
2. has collage be difficult for your sister brother or anyone? will you like for it for you to be easier?
- tell what de offer.
who will this help?
- students
obsticles?
- that they are not ready to choose a carrer
solve: giving other options until they get ready
evidence?
- its better to take each student at a time
- people most offten succeed when they are prepaered to do something or for whats coming
- mayority of the schools are now trying to prepare ids to see what oportunities they have.
why would
-students? because then they know that they are going to be and are prepared
-parents? they can avoid having to pay more money for collage and new carrers
-teachers? because they only teach what they are good at or like to and get to know their students really well
-adim? they will gain more money and the school will be more professional
sounds?
- insipiring songs
story?
- commerical
portafolio feedback
you should put the project you made and more picture about you. i would like a bit more information about each project and learning overall it was great
If I was a stranger
If i was a stranger who didnt know me, or had any contact with me by looking at my portafolio at first view I will imidatlly asume that i am adicted to Messi, not only because its full of photos of him but because i talk abput him alot in all that i saw.
while you keep reading on you would probably realize that i can express my self and put alot effort in proojects, as many of my choosen pieces are projects.
while you keep reading on you would probably realize that i can express my self and put alot effort in proojects, as many of my choosen pieces are projects.
miércoles, 16 de mayo de 2012
script frist drafs
School video script:
·
Do you get to collage and don’t know what you
want to be, well that no happening any more.
·
Pictures-music
·
Show sports and carrer options
·
Pictures
·
Music
·
Slogan
·
Benefits-canas & romero
domingo, 13 de mayo de 2012
book review
Talk about your favorite or main character Quotes from the book
Discuss a part of the book which you really enjoyed
Talk about the theme
Talk about the feeling you had when you read the book or how did it make you feel
MUST: tell if you recomend why yes or why not and to who
jueves, 10 de mayo de 2012
peer feedback
Daniela canas:
romero i think you did an amazing job i would like to see more ditale and it to be a little bit longer but over all it was great
rafael echeveria:
you did a very good job, although maybe a little more description and detail would help
romero i think you did an amazing job i would like to see more ditale and it to be a little bit longer but over all it was great
rafael echeveria:
you did a very good job, although maybe a little more description and detail would help
martes, 8 de mayo de 2012
chosen peace
I have choosen that I don't want to edit my work because I want to create a new whole one. I want to right about the personal feeling in the binacionals final game, telling details about the game and expresing the feelings also telling some other things that happend throught this one and as its a topic which I like so I think I'm really going to enjoy writting it.
scchool questions inside
we want to change are school because we want to prepare the kids for collage and make them see the real life when their are young so they are prepared.
kids can benefir from the school cause it makes them see what is needed for each career and be more success full in their future. Also as they are going to work hand to hand with specialized people and tecahers taking in consideration each student.
parents: if the their kids take a career they dont want because they didnt learn about it before choosing to take it they can save having their kids take aother career and start from 0 and have to pay collage again, aslo by seeing their kids be happy and see that the school really focus on each and every one of them.
administrator: the kids are with a lot of knoledge and because they are gona gain more money because the teachers are more specialiced in the areas, also getting to now each kid.
Details:
- elemntary is going to be normal(like CNG) except that kids will have background info about the carrers so they can de able to choose.
- middle school is also going to be like CNG but you will explore each carrer and exporatories are going to be like about the options of carrers
- it can be boarding school or a normal achool depending of where you live.
- athletics are going to be as good as all the other carrers like: architecture, lawers, etc
- you specialized in the carrer chossen thhroughout HS
- specialized people in your area would come each month and teach the students in HS about their carrers and whats expected and also give them tips about how it is in the every day life.
- when we can we will take students into their areas so they can live in it.
sábado, 5 de mayo de 2012
school questions
would there be careers not showed or included ?
1. What career won't be included:
-economical careers
-athletic careers
-art/creative careers
-political careers
-musical careers
If there is a career we don't have then people would have to make student sign a paper with at lest 250 signatures in agreement to the new career to be applied in school
Are you going to be clases like athletics?
Atheltics are going to be included they are a huge part of our school
Boarding school or family school?
If your family lives in the place where are school is then they stay with their family but if not then there will be some rooms inside the campus
digital story telling
1. A point of view
2. A dramatic question
3. Emotion
4. Voice/ personality
5. Soundtrack
6. Economy/ get to the point
7. Pacing/ enough time with each point
me
In school I really like to do many things. I consider myself a really happy person and a person with a really positive attitude. When I finish school and I have to go to my house I most likely don't to yet but stay to play soccer. Soccer is a sport I have played since I can't remeber when, in my family mi brothers both of them; Alejandro and Camilo belong to many teams not only the ones in school but many others in a really good level, my dad played throughout all his life people even told him to become a profesional but now a days he can't play anymore because of a disease that he has. As I enjoy playing soccer a lot y also love whatchinh it, I'm a huge fan of FC Barcelona, I love Lionel Messi which is another passion that I have. Many times when I arrive from school after doing my homework I love to go on to tumblr to reblog photos about Messi.
Other than sports I really like being with my friends, I consider myself a really social person and sorounded by a variety of people and friends which I love being with. I also love to watch series online, I track a lot of them like; Gossip Girl, Big Bang Theory, Modern Family, Revenge, those are only few. Meanwhile I watch I love to eat, I eat everything except bananas which I don't like at all, as I love to eat well I also cook some things that also comes from family. I love doing many things and being happy!!
In my portafolio I think that I could include my passions in photos, I think that all of them can be represented in pictures.
jueves, 3 de mayo de 2012
work chosen
Elective: PE I have always like that class because is a class in which you disconect from all the academic and those things, the 3 things that I most liked or well activites were soccer well because I love soccer and also I discovered that I'm good at volleyball especially at serving which I didn't know I was good at.
Sociales: In sociales I have done really well through out the whole year. One of the best assigments that I did was the interviews, in this assigment we where supposed to interview about 3 really important people who worked in politics or people who knew about politics. I think that this project which I did with a partner; Isabela Munoz, was really good and we did it with alor of dedication and really got the information we where hoping to get and also more than what we hoped.
English:
Books:
-the wizard of us
-the boy in the striped pijamas
- heaven is for real
- catching fire
For me the best project I did in english class and to be honest we did many projects was the persuasive project! This project was supposed to have Ethos, Pathos and Logos. This project was in partners and my partners where sofia and laura and I think that it was a really goood video and had all the info needed.
Social Studies: In social studies class I think has been one of the most interesting and really intertaiment classes I've ever had. In this class I have really put a lot of effort throughout all the year and I really like the grades I got in my tests and DBQ.
Math: Math has always been a really hard subject for me to understand since I was little and well I hope I can say for not a much longer time.
Science: I'm really proud of a a lab I did about matter in which I could really explain everything!
Spanish: In spanish we have done many projects including like a binacionals new report, a nacional report and many more although for me the best project I did was a Lionel Messi project. As I love him I really did an amazing job in the project. Out of school: Out f school I really like to play soccer and whatch series online. I love being with my friends and watch soccer. Also now I love to be on tumblr because I have a Messi tumblr so its really cool. About me: I love playing soccer. Other than soccer I also love to eat and sleep!
best of the year
1. What's my best work of the year? 3 things 2. What make these things "the best" 3. What motivated me to do better on these three things than my other work. 1. For me the best 3 things that I did throught this year where the persuasive video in english class, the interviwes in sociales class and the Messi project in español! 2. I think that this 3 tasks that I think I did the best on where the 3 of them projects what I mean is that the 3 of them where 2 of them videos and the other one a power point which I think that always help me to do the best in. 3. Also this 3 things where topics which I really find myself familiar to, for example in the abortion project I feel like its a topic which people really need to understand that it needs to stop and its a topic also that really touches you, the interviews where a really important project and its a topic which in my house we discuss a lot so its a topic I really wanted to learn about and by interviewing some people who are really experts made me put all my effort in, the Messi project is a project which y really enjoyed doing because as I love messi it was getting to know more about him and it was a project in which I could really put nice photos and things I liked.
viernes, 27 de abril de 2012
New school project
Idea:
In schools now you start thinking of what you are going to
become when you pass to collage or at your senior year. The idea we want to
change is that students in our school should have normal school meaning
primary, elentary and middle school. Once kids arrive to middle school we want
that they choose that they are going to be ours there carrier going to be so
they specialize on that. You will have classes like math and English and exploratory
but you will concentrate on your future and a specialized person will work with
you so you are strong at the subject you choose.
How would support us?
People who would support are idea would be the specialized people like soccer players, layers, artists, business managers who know about their jobs and would like to help people know about what they do and what are the importance of their jobs. Also people like parents who want to support their kids and make them choose a career they really want.
Who would be are obstacles?
Are big problem would be kids who are at the grade to choose on what they would have to specialize and are thoughtful about what they want and still are not interested in a special career . There would be to solutions to this problem. The solutions would be up to the student to either repeat grade and look at every career to see which on they would like more to be dedicated to or either keep on the next grade in normal classes but the problem would be that they would not be taught anymore what each career is about they would just continue ad if it’s a normal school and would receive normal classes but not many opportunities would be given. If volunteers of specialist are little the second choose would be to get into the action, like if you want to be an actor go to a theater , backstage or to a be in a place where there are making a movie or series and see what’s expected and what you need for this job.
Research:
Here I found out that in the Big Picture schools they are
really trying to work with one person at a time or one student at a time so
people really get to understand and human qualities also grow up.
he wants a really similar idea of making it specialized not
in carriers but in your passions. He aslo wants to encourage a lot that
students meet up with profecionals and make sure that they are getting the best
education.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LMCZvGesRz8
they agree with us alot that students should learn about many things that will help in the future and teachers help them by guiding them into a path which will help them alot. also they have tryed to conect learning with real life.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LMCZvGesRz8
they agree with us alot that students should learn about many things that will help in the future and teachers help them by guiding them into a path which will help them alot. also they have tryed to conect learning with real life.
miércoles, 25 de abril de 2012
brainstornming
- less homework
- more group work
- learing areas which are conftable
- more time between classes
-start like at 9 am
- more tecnology stuff
-more sports
-treat students more close
-listen to students ideas
-short classes
- more group work
- learing areas which are conftable
- more time between classes
-start like at 9 am
- more tecnology stuff
-more sports
-treat students more close
-listen to students ideas
-short classes
portafolio
For who?
Teachers
Parents
7 graders
Camps
HS teachers
Collage
Yourself
What are the parts of a portafolio?
Elective
Sociales
English- books read
Social Studies
Math
Science
Spanish
Outdoor school activities
Personal
Teachers
Parents
7 graders
Camps
HS teachers
Collage
Yourself
What are the parts of a portafolio?
Elective
Sociales
English- books read
Social Studies
Math
Science
Spanish
Outdoor school activities
Personal
about learning
I think this year was really sucsessfullThis year in english something that was really a expirience that every student dreams of happend! Having sofas, puffs, comffy charies and more really cool benefits for our use we available for us. For me espacially I think it worked a lot because many times before this really cool room you were always disturbed by the chair or the desk or who cold it was and many more but not this year. This year the atmosphere of the room, of the class was a like peacefull enviorment where you felt save! A really important thing that really changed me during this year was loving to read. I could now sit and read for hours and I think that this was really a thing we worked out because every class the 20 minutes that made me really like reading. This year was the first one in which tecnology influenced a lot, I think that was really important because tecnology is a really big factor in everyday life and learing for example tech tools which you now help us only for the multiple projects we had in enhlish but also help us to duse them in other clases. This year in english we also worked a lot in groups which helped a lot to learn for our team mates and also find new references that are not always the internet or teacher but people are own age.
creativity video
1. How learning changed because it was supposed to be for earlyer civilazations and not how it is now 2. Advertasing is making kids distract a lot. 3.School are changing because of the outside life
lunes, 23 de abril de 2012
lunes, 16 de abril de 2012
lunes, 9 de abril de 2012
applying
Flash Cards
When was he born? 1562
Who were his parents? John shakespeare Mary arden
How many kids did he had? 3
What where the kids names? Susana, hamlet, judith
What here the 3 categories his worting was divided into? Tradegies Comedies Histories
Explain each categorie Tradeigies; most of the main characters die Histories; based on stories of monarchy so people considered them boring Comedies; happy endings
How many plays did he do? 37
How many sonnets? 154
What was his wife name Anne hathaway
Why did queen elizabeth put down the shows in the theaters? Beacuse of disseases Were the theartes located? Poor areas
True or false: shakespeare was famous after his death F
At what age did he move to london? 37
Who where the actors in his plays? Men
knowing and understanding
Born in 1564 john shakespeare and mary arden Lived in statford upon avon
Drop out of school at 13 years
1582 married anne hathaway
Had a daughter susana, and twins hamlet and judith
1591 age of 27 moved to london Wrote 37 plays and 154 sonnets
Livied in elizabethen era
The theaters had to be shoot down at sometimes because of fear of dissease
1611 the was the translalate the bible to king james
Publicly excecuted
people didn't use toilets so diseases will spread really easilly
the queen and king really liked shakespeare and told him to write plays for her and told him to wirte plays for her and requested characters
around the theaters where pubs and where located at the poor neighbordhoods
he had serveral afaries not only his wife
unlike a lot of artist he was famous while he lived not like many that ebcome after they die and was really rich
all of the actors in that time where men so if there was women parts men will do it
3 categories:
Tradeigies; most of the main characters die
Histories;
based on stories of monarchy so people considered them boring
Comedies; happy endings
lunes, 2 de abril de 2012
shakespeare
who was shakespeare?
knowing:
- find + view a video
understanding:
- take notes on video
applying:
- small game
analyzing :
- poplet about the atmosphere of his writing
evaluating:
- rank the writing in order for peers to read
creating:
- represent a small árt pf a good play
knowing:
- find + view a video
understanding:
- take notes on video
applying:
- small game
analyzing :
- poplet about the atmosphere of his writing
evaluating:
- rank the writing in order for peers to read
creating:
- represent a small árt pf a good play
domingo, 25 de marzo de 2012
novel project
i did this Uglies project with daniela canas
my themes:
an operation whont change you
been pretty isnet everithing in life
being pretty dosent last forever
frindship is biger then lookes
looks8
loves conquers all
Daniela´s themes:
- the main character is keeping promises with her best friend and would do anything to keep them( friendship is the most important thing in life)-the main character when gets to the smoke docent want to petty her friend because she knows that this place where they are is her friends dream( friendship is the most important thing in life)
- tally went to pretty town because she missed her best friend and she would suffer the consequences if she got caught just to see him( love breaks all the rules)
-tally would do anything to become pretty ( when you have a dream nothing comes between you and your dream)
Choosen theme
the theme we chose was Daniela´s friendship is the most important thing in life, we chose this theme because we belive that it is really reflected throughout all the book, and giving examples of it like they always said that shay only wanted to be best friends and that opperations are just thing which will change your outside but not your inside and you will be still being who you are.
daniels theme was better than mine because after alot of discussion we figured out that friendship in this case was more important than love, love at one point was really important because all the David stuff and so, but at the end what mattered was the relationship between Shay and Tally and looks or aspects didnt count.
http://www.xtranormal.com/watch/13225910/uglies-theme
my themes:
an operation whont change you
been pretty isnet everithing in life
being pretty dosent last forever
frindship is biger then lookes
looks8
loves conquers all
Daniela´s themes:
- the main character is keeping promises with her best friend and would do anything to keep them( friendship is the most important thing in life)-the main character when gets to the smoke docent want to petty her friend because she knows that this place where they are is her friends dream( friendship is the most important thing in life)
- tally went to pretty town because she missed her best friend and she would suffer the consequences if she got caught just to see him( love breaks all the rules)
-tally would do anything to become pretty ( when you have a dream nothing comes between you and your dream)
themes:
Daniela´s :
i think the theme is that friendship is not about the looks is about the sincerity and the promises you keep with them. a friendship is more important then becoming or being a pretty because friendship is forever in the other hand being pretty last little and wont guaranty you happiness. tally realizes this after many mistakes she made but she did a good job trying to keep promises and loyalty even though it was difficult sometimes for her and made a lot of thing she regrate latter
mariana´s
: i think that the theme of the uglies is that love conquers all because its not only about physical look or what you see in the outside but the inside also, you fight for love in many ways, fghting for who you like and for your friends. uglies express alot of this ideas. also anpther example is that Tally ends up a pretty relationship she has with Shay to be with David, so they show that with love everything is possible and you are going to fight and de powerfull.
Choosen theme
the theme we chose was Daniela´s friendship is the most important thing in life, we chose this theme because we belive that it is really reflected throughout all the book, and giving examples of it like they always said that shay only wanted to be best friends and that opperations are just thing which will change your outside but not your inside and you will be still being who you are.
daniels theme was better than mine because after alot of discussion we figured out that friendship in this case was more important than love, love at one point was really important because all the David stuff and so, but at the end what mattered was the relationship between Shay and Tally and looks or aspects didnt count.
FINAL FOR A 4
lunes, 12 de marzo de 2012
feedback
in the feedback we had in class they mostly told me to:
- put more details about the freezing part
- the process which takes place to edit it and know it more especific
- more information related with the cost
- put more details about the freezing part
- the process which takes place to edit it and know it more especific
- more information related with the cost
Group Work
many people preffer to work in groups or by partners and that includes me. when you work in a group you learn to do and to express thoughts not only by not only your way but the ways your friends have also therefore you have new ideas and new ways to show your work.
a really good aspect in working in groups is that you will not have to do all the research by yourself, your peers will be also responsable of their part and that will make you focus more on your part and then be able to compare and contrast being an expert in your topic and then becoming one in other topics thanks to your peers althought you must be willing to do your part because you depend on your peers work and they depend in yours.
as in working in a group i find out that the most advantage when you dont understand something you have resources who are not only your teacher or the internet which in some cases you wont understand but people, your team mates who explain to you and help you understand. its really important when the time comes to put everything together beacuse deffinetly more than one mind thinks and has more ideas that just one.
i love working in groupss!!!
a really good aspect in working in groups is that you will not have to do all the research by yourself, your peers will be also responsable of their part and that will make you focus more on your part and then be able to compare and contrast being an expert in your topic and then becoming one in other topics thanks to your peers althought you must be willing to do your part because you depend on your peers work and they depend in yours.
as in working in a group i find out that the most advantage when you dont understand something you have resources who are not only your teacher or the internet which in some cases you wont understand but people, your team mates who explain to you and help you understand. its really important when the time comes to put everything together beacuse deffinetly more than one mind thinks and has more ideas that just one.
i love working in groupss!!!
jueves, 8 de marzo de 2012
first invention draft
Life
Extension Treatment
Invention Description
Our invention is about how to prevent dyeing
in early times and how can you live more with the technique that freezing
yourself. By the calculations if you freeze yorself at night then you will live as twice as what you live now.
A really important part for you to
live longer is your organs and your body inside meaning the heart the lungs and
all the vital organs have to be really healthy.
If you decide to freeze yourself you
will do it at night therefore you will live twice your life. Freezing yourself
will be in a special coffin the type of coffin depends on the one you order there is many diffrent kind of then and ut will also depend on that the price of the whole treatment. Special
wires will help you control your heart beat and help you be stable every night with ice that will keep you cold.
The place in which you will be a room that is in a really special temperature and inside well the coffin.
This new idea will be about 3.000 dollars, as the coast of the coffrin is high and all the mantainance of the treatment. As the price says only people who are really high class and who can afford it can buy it, for the future we also think that hospitals may be trying this systmen and can even be for all day long treatments. People who have disseases may also buy it.
The main purpose of this invention is to make people kive longer and make then also not soffer because the organs will be in a really high level of healthyness also by letting then rest at night time when the person is freezed and so that will also help the organs be healthier.
We plan that this buisness can have also sales depending on the person who we are talking about and the circunstances the person is in.
This invention is really important also because you will be freezed and with ice the time which you are inside so it is a delicated stuff.
This new idea will be about 3.000 dollars, as the coast of the coffrin is high and all the mantainance of the treatment. As the price says only people who are really high class and who can afford it can buy it, for the future we also think that hospitals may be trying this systmen and can even be for all day long treatments. People who have disseases may also buy it.
The main purpose of this invention is to make people kive longer and make then also not soffer because the organs will be in a really high level of healthyness also by letting then rest at night time when the person is freezed and so that will also help the organs be healthier.
We plan that this buisness can have also sales depending on the person who we are talking about and the circunstances the person is in.
This invention is really important also because you will be freezed and with ice the time which you are inside so it is a delicated stuff.
martes, 6 de marzo de 2012
Theme in Uglies
overcome fears:
- when they were in the ruins and you couldnt use your hoverboard anymore so tally had like to be really pacience and like she was really stressed but she made it
- in the rollercoaster, well that how they called it, and tally felled and everything so with that it was really stress
judge by what we see:
- when tally told shay that it was not only the outside, but the inside also counted.
- when tally also told shay that eventhough you had the opperation it will still be a part of you
friendship has obsticles:
- when all the things in the ruins happend that they made just like as they had different oppinions like just go and dont talk to each other anymore but instead they like talked it out and kept on going
- all abput like david and peris and like the personalities so they had to work for it
- when they were in the ruins and you couldnt use your hoverboard anymore so tally had like to be really pacience and like she was really stressed but she made it
- in the rollercoaster, well that how they called it, and tally felled and everything so with that it was really stress
judge by what we see:
- when tally told shay that it was not only the outside, but the inside also counted.
- when tally also told shay that eventhough you had the opperation it will still be a part of you
friendship has obsticles:
- when all the things in the ruins happend that they made just like as they had different oppinions like just go and dont talk to each other anymore but instead they like talked it out and kept on going
- all abput like david and peris and like the personalities so they had to work for it
martes, 28 de febrero de 2012
real learning is..
For me real learning really is about understanding.
The teachers and the students both have to be willing to learn of else nothing can de done.
that things are well explain and in many ways so if you don’t get it the first time with multiple times its easier and you have other options however then put in practice what you learned.
Also that if you don’t understand something the teacher is there to explain
Learn in a normal pace which is good for everyone to understand while you are working.
The teacher that I best understood everything was
Ms. Voughn, she was my socials teacher when I was in 6 grade. I think that I understood
her perfectly because she took one whole class to explain the information and on the other hand a total
class for us to like ask questions and do fun things with that information,
then a class to do a project which we could do in class and then a quiz. The information
you could memorize it perfectly and it was a class which you where happy to go J
lunes, 27 de febrero de 2012
age prevention
Life Extension
So far in our group we have been researching
about life extension treatment, first we started researching about facial and
like skin, beauty and surgeries about physical stuff, we all researched about
that but them we started to research about like what’s inside your body and start
to look more into Disney and why he freeze himself. Now we are still into the
ideas of healthy organs and seeing info about Disney however we have to keep researching if that
freezing can also affect the organs and how.
We have pointed out some theories; the
first theory was the physical party your look, but we figured that had nothing
to do with you living longer so it was not our priority. The second one was
that if you keep your body healthy, by your organs being healthy and avoiding diseases
you can live longer on the other hand we found out that maybe
you could live longer by freezing our body every night so you can live the
double amount of time you live now, that’s our theory for now although we need to know
if that can affect your organs like your lounges, heart and many more.
PRESERVING INTERNAL ORGANS AT FREEZE
TEMPERATURE
You can see
that this site is reliable because is a .org and those sites are pretty
reliable.
In this page I could read
that well is related to freezing the organs, when you are doing an organ
transplant you keep the heart or whatever the organ is in box that is really
cold so it preserves a lot better than normal temperature. This is a start clue
to show you that cold temperature works for keeping organs safe.
You can see
that this site is reliable because is a .org and those sites are pretty
reliable.
According to this article
organs do not have an effect on your body if it is in a freeze temperature. They
even say that they get mice to freeze and what’s more they bring the embryos back to life. This
treatment in mice is really expensive and that how we know that only about one
person has freeze himself who is Disney.
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/2133961.stm
(BBC. 2002)
You can see that this site is reliable because first of
all is BBC NEWS which is a very known and good source and also is .uk so that’s
also really reliable. In this site I can see that many people by now about
100 people have already frozen themselves around the whole world and many by
now have made arrangements to freeze themselves. To freeze you it follows a process.
Scientist belief that if people are already frozen then they can restore their
body completely.
Based on the research that I found
out today I have some questions, the first one is. Can your body be frozen if it’s
not dead? And the second one is still what is causing the organs to be old and
not healthy? Are the mice similar as humans in body, so then for humans it
would also be good to freeze? After all
this new and really interesting new ideas I found out a new theory which I think
that if the organs in a transplant are being translated in a really cold box
then maybe your body can also, I found that really interesting. The second
theory that I figured out is that if your organs are really healthy there is no
reason why you couldn’t freeze yourself.
Next I will like to look more into
all the mice stuff to be able to respond to my question about if they are
similar to us, and the second idea I would like to research next is how you
freeze yourself to be sure that it wouldn’t affect your organs at all.
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