song

Rolling in the deep

There's a fire starting in my heart,

Reaching a fever pitch and it's bring me out the dark.

Finally I can see you crystal clear

Go ahead and sell me out and I'll lay your ship bare.

See how I'll leave, with every piece of you

Don't underestimate the things that I will do.

There's a fire starting in my heart,

Reaching a fever pitch and it's bring me out the dark.

The scars of your love, remind me of us.

They keep me thinking that we almost had it all

The scars of your love, they leave me breathless

I can't help feeling

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

And you played it

To the beat

Baby I have no story to be told

But I've heard one of you and I'm gonna make your head burn,

Think of me in the depths of your despair

Making a home down there as mine sure won't be shared

The scars of your love, remind you of us.

They keep me thinking that we almost had it all

The scars of your love, they leave me breathless

I can't help feeling

We could have had it all

Adele Rolling In The Deep lyrics found on http://www.directlyrics.com/adelele-rolling-in-the-deep-lyrics.html

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

And you played it

To the beat

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

But you played it

With a beating

Throw your soul threw every open door

Count your blessings to find what you look for

Turn my sorrow into treasured gold

You pay me back in kind and reap just what you sow

We could have had it all

We could have had it all

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

And you played it to the beat

We could have had it all

Rolling in the deep

You had my heart inside your hand

But you played it,

You played it,

You played it

You played it to the beat

notes on grinch

alliteration: sickly,sweet, nog, sucking cheer mongers
the baste the beast and the gulp of grog

onomonpeia: jo jo jo jo jo
whoo whoo whoo
tic toc tic toc

personification: the fire of love

hyperbole: grinchs speach to cindy lu

similie: she will be on me like fleegle flies

repetition: jury duty, jury duty, jury duty
hate hate hate hate hate double hate

2 personal topics

1. Soccer!
I know that girls long ago didnt olay soccer but now omg i love it! We the b team of CNG are playing the final on tuesday against another school from bogota thats los nogales, their really good although i think that we can make it :) but for me the best price that soccer has is BARCELoNA FC omg i love messi! Soccer helps me relax of everything, but i have a hit thats bithering me sometimes when i play thats like the wirst ever! Im really glad!! :)

2. Thanksgiving!
Turkey turkey turkey! Black friday black friday black friday! Vacation vacation vacation! Is like everything i loved combined! Im so glad that we have thanksgvigng in owr school, its a american holiday that i love! Its really fun but it should be longerr :). also i learned like the story that goes under thanksdigving which was in the all school assembly

Figurative language

Onomonopea: words as a sound
Pop

Metaphor: the comparisim of two things without using like or as
You are my sunshine

Simile: a comparisim of two things using like or as
Quiet as a mouse

Ryhme: the end of the sound us the same
Hall, ball, fall, doll

Personification: giving human qualities to non living things
The lamo sat in the table

Repetition: repiting a word more than twice
Baby baby baby

Hyoerbole: very big exageration
His the fastes runner in all the world

Alliteration: repetition of a constant
Peter piper oicked a peck of pickled peper

Assonance: repetition of a voule
He saw the ball far away

Imagery: appeal to senses to creat a picture in te readers mind

Final draft campaign

No to abortion! 

We can definetly make the world a better place if we can make people see that abotion is not the solution when a mother is pregant. 

Abortion is commiting murder from the point of view of not only me but many experts. Comiting abortion is when a mother decides that she is not going to have the baby she is carying inside her but she is going to kill the little baby who is forming inside her body. The way that mothers abort is by a sucking kind of pip which starts to suck the little baby peace by peace, its horrible so at the end shes not just killing her baby, but in a really cruel form. 

When mothers abort they dont only expiriences physical dameges like: cancer, ovarie cancer can happen and breast cancer also, if she wants to have other babies they may come out with some difficulties, and her health decreses alot. Not only is there physical damages but physhological also, mothers live there entire life with regrets eventhough she decidedd to kill her baby in that moment after she can regret, and that even can lead to suecide and many more things.

As we are telling you to NOT abort, there has to be a solution, and there is: many really important foundations such as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño which help mothers usally young aged that get pregnant to help them know that killing their babies is not the soultion but that they recive the babies they didnt abort and take them to adoptation so that they can make families who cant have babies happpy, and have a very goood life, La Casa de la Madre y el Niño garanties and makes sure that thiose kids who are being adopted recive exelent families and the life that they diserve. Thats a totally better soultion that killing a baby who can become something and someone in life. 

This is a foundation has been working since 1942, 70 years. Their vision is to strengthen the quality of service that they welcome people of different classes. There are about 65 kids since newborn babies until 8-year olds. La Casa de la Madre y el Niño has a team of highly qualified professionals consisting of: Pediatricians, nurses, psychologists, speech therapists, social workers, nutritionists, psychologists, occupational therapists, among others. Also assistants in the care of children, general service staff and kitchen, and group volunteers.

So as you can see killing a baby and it may be your own baby its not to option if their solutions that you can take, with the help of amazing foundations as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño life, happyness and no deaths can happen!

Analizing videos

Sofia E, Laura M and me
1. No to abortion
2. To dont abort
3. Pathos: music and pictures
Ethos: all the info about la casa de la madre y el niño
Logos: the testimony of the mother who didnt abort
4. Frist we talked about no to abortion and them the solutions and the options rather than abortion
5. yes, i think that the testimonies helped alot and the pathos also
6. Do a foundation or help la casa de la madre y el niño

Santiango S, Felipe A, Felipe I
1. Hunger
2. Its not fair
3. Ethos: money facts; what oeople spend on things like perfume will give food for many kids
Pathos: music, pictures
Logos: also the facts about money and the kids
4. First the problem and then how you can change
5. Yes, with the pictures however i think it could have been more longer, but i liked the style which was visuable
6. Help and make people see that they can spend less momney on things that are not important and insted in people who need it also publish it

lorenzo S
1. Bulling
2. Bulling is killing and its not acceptable
3. Ethos: the puctures of the kids who had suecide
Pathos: the song was perfect and the oictures as well
Logos: the kids who have suecide and not only that but who miss school because of fear
4. Facts and then pictures
5. Yes, the pictures and the style which was visuable
6. Put severe consequences for bullies

Daniel J
1. Pertoleum abuse
2. Petroleum abuse is really bad
3. Ethos: the facts and all the info
Pathos: the pictures and the video
Logos: facts and telling what had happend
4. Problem- explanation - solution
5. Well.. He could have added voce or music or something for it to be more interesting
6. Have another thing thats not oil

final poster

Poster analisis

Jeff- laura B
Interesting-
strength: they said it really clear and i liked the example
Weekness: if you saw the poster from far away it was alittle confusing because examples were like all over the place
Style-
Strength: they made it like visuable and the kind of letters were really good
Weekness: at some times there were to much words

Mark
Persuasive: he have many examples so it made people see that need to do things right was really important
Word choice: the words itself were alittle small but the way he organized it in boxes made it clear

Laura M- sofia- me
Persuasive- strength: it was made on a letter so i think that in that way people knew exactly what we are talking about
Word choice: weekness: the words were not that colorfull so that wouldnt catch your attention right away

Gabriel p- pablo c- rafa
Onteresting- weekness: i think that they shoukd have done like e prepositions bigger so it made it more interesting see what they were talking about
Style: they made it like in a comic style so you could see from far away and i said not only a comic style but rerally big and the comic was also the example

Lorenzo
Persuaisive- strength: he gave like an introductn so we could understand better what we were talking abkut so i really liked that oart, not only that but also the examples he used p, the picture of samara trlling " if you use these wrong ik kilk you" was really interesting also
Word choice- weekness: as it was in computer it was not that catching attention and small

Bernie- roberto- daniel
Interesting- strength: the oictures in representation of the examples were really goood becau you could see them because they were big and really clear and good
Word choice- weekness: some defenitions in the poster were in computer so they were farlly small and not that colorfull

Daniela- gabriela- maria
Word choice- strength: the glitter helped alot because it not only helped people see and be atracted to the posdter but it also helped the letter be bigger
Persuasive- weekness: i didnt understand that much the examples

Santiago- felipe a
Interesting- strength: the pictures helped catch your attention and like the divison between the two wors helped it be clear
Word choice- weekness: the words didnt have colors and they were small

Campaign final! - video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XZ3vH1kt2FE

Campaign essay- first draft

No to abortion!

We can defenetly make the world a better place if we can make people see that abotion is not the solution. If we can make the mothers see that aborting is not to only way.

Abortion is commiting murder since the point of view of not only me but many experts. Comiting abortion is when a mother disides that she is not going to have the baby she is carying inside her but she is going to kill the little baby which is forming inside her body. The way that mothers abort is by a sucking kind of pip which starts to suck the little baby peace by peace, ots horrible so at the end shes not just killing her baby, but in a really cruel form.

When mothers abort they dont only expiriences physical dameges like: cancer ovaries can happen and breast cancer also, if she wants to have other babies they may come out with some difficulties, and her health decreses alot. Not only is there physical damages but cicological also, mothers kive there entire life with regrets eventhough she decidedd to kill her baby in that moment after she can regret, and that even can lead to suecide and many things more.

As we are tlling you to NOT abort, there has to be a solution, and there is: many really important foundations such as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño which help mothers usally young aged that get oregnant to help them know that killing their babies is not the soultion but that they recive the babies they didnt abort and take them to adoptation so that they can make families who cant have babies happpy, and have a very goood life, La Casa de la Madre y el Niño garanties and makes sure that thiose kids who are being adopted recive exelent families and the life that they disere. Thats a totally better soultion that killing a baby who can become something and smeone in life.

This is a foundation has been working since 1942, 70 years. Their vision is to strengthen the quality of service that they welcome people of different classes. There are about 65 kids since newborn babies until 8-year olds. La Casa de la Madre y el Niño has a team of highly qualified professionals consisting of: Pediatricians, nurses, psychologists, speech therapists, social workers, nutritionists, psychologists, occupational therapists, among others. Also assistants in the care of children, general service staff and kitchen, and group volunteers.

So as you can see killing a baby and it may be your own baby its not to option if their solutions that you can take, with the help of amazing foundations as La Casa de la Madre y el Niño life, happyness and no deaths can happen!

Story board campaign pic

Mind map TO and FROM

9 facts and 3 sources

this are 9 facts about why you shouldnt abort!

facts
1. you can recive many vaginal infections.
2. mothers can regret killing their son or daughter for all their lives
3. that regret can cause suicide
4. breast cancer
5. worst health can happen
6. cancer of ovaries
7. dangerous effects on the uterus
8. other babies if they decide to have later on can de born with deformations
9. un born babies should have the privelge to live and they are totally un defense

sources
1. la casa de la madre y el nino
2. Lorena Vargas ( administrator of la casa de la madre y el nino )
3. Amparo ( social manager of la casa del madre y el nino
4. testimonies of mothers

campaign mind map