domingo, 23 de octubre de 2011

final myth draft

CNG or Colegio Nueva Granada, an excellent school in Bogota. New year, august 15, new teachers, new students, new principal, and it seemed that the same old problem; lates. Micheal new student at CNG, he was perfect; tall, handsome, hot and one thing that made him amazing was that we was working to be the captain of the soccer team, he was just great at everything he did except for arriving on time to class.

As tardy’s where such a trouble in CNG there was this legendary discipline teacher who had work for many international schools by then. His name was Brad Bellick. He was really creepy. In all school assembly they were introducing all the new teachers when suddenly Bellicks name appeared, Micheal freaked out as he had been the last discipline teacher in Michael last school; Green Cove. Seconds after he just looked at his brother, best friends and everything to him ; Lincon. They were in complete shock…

After one week of Michael getting late to many of his classes and Bellick just wating for the best opportunity he had to torture and make Micheal suffer. Michael got late to his next class because he stayed talking after PE with Lincon about the resent dead of Micheal’s mother. Bellick called Michael to his office, Michael thought he had change and as he hold him to stay afterschool, he just thought it was a normal afterschool detention like in every school...

At 2 sharp, micheal arrived to Bellick’s office. At first everything was okay, as there was another kid called Theodore at detention, as soon as Theodore left that was abput 2:30 Bellick told Micheal to go outside and then he started to know that things were not okay. As soon as they got out to like the playground,, everyone at campus had left he started to sudddenly turn red, his vains poped 3d out of his face and a sudden lightning hitted the ground, as soon as it hitted it a crack started to happen, it was sucking everything one its path, and guess what the next thing on its path was Micheal, ground started to suck him, faster that what Micheal thought, as Bellick thought that the ground was going to kill Micheal he went away, when suddenly Micheal was struggeling for getting a knife which he had on his poket, but it wasn’t nesesary know. As with his elvos where pushing away the ground in a amazing way, he didn’t know where all his force was coming from, but he couldn’t control it, it was a lot!

After about 50 seconds after Micheal started to figure out that unnormal power, he managed to get out of the sucking ground. The second he got out of there he ran as fast as he could to get Bellick but it was way to fast. After he had seen that he had done he realized that he was running as fast as no one could, like que could really win a cheetah or something, but in a so fast way! Next day you just can´t imagine Bellick´s face as soon as he saw Micheal in a perfect shape. The day pased and Micheal wated till after school to go to Bellick´s office. As soon as he arrived there, Bellick just asked him, “ how, how did you get away with life if I had puted you a order to the gods to kill you?” Micheal just answered, “ well it seems that my mom who died few weeks just before this incident is Athenea goddness of the war, and that both children Micheal and Lincon will never loose a fight, and will punish those persons who tried to hurt Athenea´s little babys. So it seemed that Bellick was in for a treat.

As micheal and his mother where really close and could communicate anytime they wanted, Micheal asked her for a favor;the favor was for her to do a pack with Ades althought he wasn’t the best person who you could like to do pacts with but anyway Athenea could get Ades to help her and take Bellick to the under world, because remember no one messes up with to children of the gods. Bellick was really calmed and resting in his office when suddenly a fire started to come out of his bathroom, the entrance and the beginning of his terrible life in the under world was just beginning. Ades himself made Bellick do a quit letter so that no one would care where he could be…

Next day Micheal woke up, and he couldn’t belive himself he thought it wasn’t real that Bellick was finally gone and for good. A new detention teacher came, he was a really understanding teacher and a one with normal consequences. ;) that day Lincon and Micheal did the party of the year not only because Bellick was gone but because Micheal and all the soccer team had one the uncoli games and because they finally knew all that there mother was hidding from them, but that was only between the two brothers! And finnally it became a normal school just like al others! athenea would sometimes send Micheal news about bellick and let me tell you, oh they were so gorse and bad ones, but it was what de diserve, to bad he messed upp with th wrond ones.

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