Jeff- laura B
Interesting-
strength: they said it really clear and i liked the example
Weekness: if you saw the poster from far away it was alittle confusing because examples were like all over the place
Style-
Strength: they made it like visuable and the kind of letters were really good
Weekness: at some times there were to much words
Mark
Persuasive: he have many examples so it made people see that need to do things right was really important
Word choice: the words itself were alittle small but the way he organized it in boxes made it clear
Laura M- sofia- me
Persuasive- strength: it was made on a letter so i think that in that way people knew exactly what we are talking about
Word choice: weekness: the words were not that colorfull so that wouldnt catch your attention right away
Gabriel p- pablo c- rafa
Onteresting- weekness: i think that they shoukd have done like e prepositions bigger so it made it more interesting see what they were talking about
Style: they made it like in a comic style so you could see from far away and i said not only a comic style but rerally big and the comic was also the example
Lorenzo
Persuaisive- strength: he gave like an introductn so we could understand better what we were talking abkut so i really liked that oart, not only that but also the examples he used p, the picture of samara trlling " if you use these wrong ik kilk you" was really interesting also
Word choice- weekness: as it was in computer it was not that catching attention and small
Bernie- roberto- daniel
Interesting- strength: the oictures in representation of the examples were really goood becau you could see them because they were big and really clear and good
Word choice- weekness: some defenitions in the poster were in computer so they were farlly small and not that colorfull
Daniela- gabriela- maria
Word choice- strength: the glitter helped alot because it not only helped people see and be atracted to the posdter but it also helped the letter be bigger
Persuasive- weekness: i didnt understand that much the examples
Santiago- felipe a
Interesting- strength: the pictures helped catch your attention and like the divison between the two wors helped it be clear
Word choice- weekness: the words didnt have colors and they were small
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