lunes, 28 de mayo de 2012

feedback to peer 3.5

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Daniela read the same book as me both by recomendation of Ms. Shawn. 

i think that the vocabulary words that you choose were really good and the deffenitions were  brief and to the point. They sentences were also good and made sense with the definitions below. The comparisons of the words were also good they were simple topics but topics which you used in daily life so that were easier to understand. The review was also really good, although I would add to it the recommendation of people who should read this book.




feedback gave to me, by Daniela Cañas:

i liked how she put effort in there definitions and made her sentences really clear and able to understand what word she used to replace it.i think it is a great job and the creativity she used to made the diagram was amazing i would never think about doing it actually like that. to improve their is not much actually just review some sentences that she didn't replaced the word i think in one but i really like her work over all 

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